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Old 05-21-2006, 05:47 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I wrote this today, but haven't been able to think of a suitable title? Any suggestions much appreciated!

[V1]
Be prepared for my inspections
Be ready to tell me your confessions
Don't be afraid of what I might think
If your eyes hurt make sure they blink.

[Chorus]
Because I'm gonna make myself clear
Stadn up and walk over here to me
I know that I fill you with fear
That why I want you to see.

[V2]
Rub the dust from your eyes
Clean your face and put on your disguise
Show me you're a fake man
Take the time to make your plan.

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Try and see if you'll push me away
I just don't have the patience anymore
I ain't going anywhere today
So wait for me at the front door.

[Chorus]
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Old 05-22-2006, 06:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Get ready?

Be prepared?
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Old 05-22-2006, 07:23 PM   #3 (permalink)
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My suggestion is listen to folk music. Seriosly. Pete Seeger, Bob Dylan, Nick Drake stuff like that or read a good book or something. Go get substance somewhere, anywhere. It's so generic.
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Old 05-22-2006, 07:30 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ahh, i listened to Bob Dylan in class, horrible voice, but the way he did it...amazing. I was listening to the song Hurricane.
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Old 05-22-2006, 07:31 PM   #5 (permalink)
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His voice can grow on you, I didnt like it at first. He's a pure genious song writer.
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Old 05-22-2006, 07:35 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hmm, cant disagree with that.

His song Hurricane is about something serious, but when i listen to it i get the sense of going on a road trip. Rushing, driving, chillin, conflicts all mixed together.
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Old 05-22-2006, 07:41 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Good song. He's one of the most up beat folk song writers I know of. That's part of the attraction for me.
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Old 05-26-2006, 03:54 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hey angel

I think I know the guy you wrote about

Is this him?

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**************
You’re a Grain of Salt

1,)
I doubt you’ll pass inspection
When I demand your confession
I’ll still tell you what I think
When you lie, you never blink
2.)
You’ll be wearing your disguise
That’s fooled the gals and the guys
A poor excuse for a man
But now I see your selfish scam

CH)
I’ll make it clear
That what I hear
I’ll take with a grain of salt
Don’t call me dear
You’re not sincere
I was gullible to a fault.
You’re a grain of salt!

3.)
As I plan this confrontation
More and more I feel frustration
I think you know I’m on to you
And afraid of what I’ll do
4.)
Like expose you to your friends
They never accept your amends
You’ve been cruel and played them too
The end of you is overdue.

CH)
I’ll make it clear
That what I hear
I’ll take with a grain of salt
Don’t call me dear
You’re not sincere
I was gullible to a fault.
You’re a grain of salt!
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This could also have a bridge between the 4th verse adn the chorus-- sp[litting off to more details??

Good Luck

hope I was on track?!!

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