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Old 04-24-2007, 08:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Kind of simple, but here you go. It's not the best, I wrote it around 3 a.m. this morning in the midst of an English term paper.



There is a place, far beyond illusion
Through the darkness, beyond all man’s restraints
There is a place, where soft amber light’s glow
Illumines shadows on my face

There’s a place, at the edge of the world
In God’s country, or so it may seem
I stand immersed, in the afterglow
Like a silhouette in a dream

There is a place, a sanctuary without walls,
Where the sound of silence reigns
Troubles not lost, but all is forgotten
Serenity, more than words can sing.
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Old 04-24-2007, 10:28 PM   #2 (permalink)
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illuminates*?
I think it's good, and I hate most poetry.
Good job.
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Old 04-25-2007, 03:44 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hmm, The obvious one would be 'there is a place'. SSomething more subtle would be better for the name though.
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Old 04-25-2007, 04:52 AM   #4 (permalink)
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If it is actually a song then you should call it There Is A Place because then people will be able to link the name and the song straight away. If it's just a poem then something more creative would be better, as the title would be an additional part of the composition.
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Old 04-25-2007, 02:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i liked it.
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