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07-25-2006, 10:59 PM | #1 (permalink) |
Music Addict
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: new jersey
Posts: 48
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Angel Dust
I'm relatively new here, but I decided to post some of my lyrics anyway. I have all my lyrics saved onto one Word file, and I just took the first one on the list and posted it. Your suggestions are appreciated!
Angel Dust Diving into the mystic depths of thought and space and time The celestial enigmas shun my sweet sublime My swirling thoughts, long bereft with intrusion The silent doldrums in my head The eloquent cascading of an ethereal serenity Isolation of this sentimental tranquility Eyes wide closed, sailing far beyond illusion Sitting on the roof, yet soaring overhead With the detrius of angels sprinkled on my shoulders The penetrating stare of the stars, swirling blurs Drowning in the moon's everlasting gaze Yet the zenith of my prayers falls far below The mystic depths of thought and space and time and shadow. |
07-26-2006, 07:30 AM | #2 (permalink) |
Full-Time Hellion
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: PA
Posts: 1,531
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I like the title.
It does make sense I suppos. There is no one real dominent rhyme scheme although I somehow doubt that's what you were going for anyway. There's just something about it I don't like. But it does sound pretty . . . kinda enigmatic though. Very enigmatic.
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