Untitled :O (Ching)

Blain · 10-17-2006, 04:58 AM

Face staring at the sky
I lay there thinking
Is this where I die?
Or is it just a feeling
It feels like I'm falling
As if I'm jumping for my life
If anyone is calling
I'm afraid it's too late...

I've been thinking alot, watching the clouds pass by
I've been left to rot... Left to die
You grabbed my hand, you grapsed it tight
But it wasn't enough, I was lost in the light
I'm all alone... X2

It's all I got so far, thats like a 5 minute job though

The Dave · 10-18-2006, 10:15 AM

A fairly trite subject as far as i'm concerned. It doesn't really paint a very good picture, all I can see is someone (a blank person), lying on the ground and dying.... dying somewhat peacefully.

10-17-2006, 04:58 AM	#1 (permalink)
Blain w0rd Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Suva, Fiji Posts: 1,030	Untitled :O Face staring at the sky I lay there thinking Is this where I die? Or is it just a feeling It feels like I'm falling As if I'm jumping for my life If anyone is calling I'm afraid it's too late... I've been thinking alot, watching the clouds pass by I've been left to rot... Left to die You grabbed my hand, you grapsed it tight But it wasn't enough, I was lost in the light I'm all alone... X2 It's all I got so far, thats like a 5 minute job though

10-18-2006, 10:15 AM	#2 (permalink)
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,815	A fairly trite subject as far as i'm concerned. It doesn't really paint a very good picture, all I can see is someone (a blank person), lying on the ground and dying.... dying somewhat peacefully.