Ramptourist in her own life (song, Hang)

Alo · 12-07-2006, 12:48 PM

I had a line in my head for a few days now... But I have no idea what to do with it. I tried something today, but it doesn't appeal to me at all. I'd like to change it so it does though. This is what I came up with till now:

you're a ramptourist in your own life
happiness just isn't right for you
you need fight after fight after fight
but we'll forgive you, it's ok this time
and again, then again, then once more, yet again
because you can't help it, no, because after all
you're a ramptourist in your own life
with a candid knife for the backs of innocents
go then kill a lamb, it'll come back from the dead
and forgive you, again then again, once more, yet again

Help?

12-07-2006, 12:48 PM	#1 (permalink)
Alo Scarf Join Date: May 2006 Location: Brighton, UK Posts: 717	Ramptourist in her own life I had a line in my head for a few days now... But I have no idea what to do with it. I tried something today, but it doesn't appeal to me at all. I'd like to change it so it does though. This is what I came up with till now: you're a ramptourist in your own life happiness just isn't right for you you need fight after fight after fight but we'll forgive you, it's ok this time and again, then again, then once more, yet again because you can't help it, no, because after all you're a ramptourist in your own life with a candid knife for the backs of innocents go then kill a lamb, it'll come back from the dead and forgive you, again then again, once more, yet again Help? __________________ I rocked my shoelaces untied Last edited by Alo; 12-08-2006 at 09:24 AM.