First Shot at Lyrics... (pink floyd, Kiss)

TheCaster · 11-23-2007, 07:14 PM

yeah i was bored one day and was listenin to some pink floyd n' drinkin some green tea... tell me what'cha think

What has it come to?
You don't know where you are.
Look what its done to you
Your bent all into pieces.

Do you think you really love him?
cause all he does is hate.
Are you sure he only wants to kiss?
or get in between the sheets

Why do you follow
Everything that is asked of you?
Do you want to be accepted?
If no one ever cares.

Is life worth living?
when your doing what your told
Is this your life?
or someone elses?

Have you figured it out yet
Cause All you gotta do is
Look inbetween the lines

Not completely my first shot at lyrics.. just the only one i kind of liked haha

~~under~~ · 11-24-2007, 12:30 AM

i can see how a sense of pink floyd would fit into this.

but there are some things that you emphasize that dont need emphasis.

for example:

Have you figured it out yet
Cause All you gotta do is
Look inbetween the lines

--
there are words you dont emphasise that need emphasis

Do you think you really love him?
cause all he does is hate.
Are you sure he only wants to kiss?
or get in between the sheets

its really good though.

TheCaster · 11-24-2007, 07:22 AM

hmm i see... thank ya

Brock_West · 11-24-2007, 11:12 PM

yeah it's really good

TheCaster · 11-25-2007, 08:11 PM

why thank you

11-23-2007, 07:14 PM	#1 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	First Shot at Lyrics... yeah i was bored one day and was listenin to some pink floyd n' drinkin some green tea... tell me what'cha think What has it come to? You don't know where you are. Look what its done to you Your bent all into pieces. Do you think you really love him? cause all he does is hate. Are you sure he only wants to kiss? or get in between the sheets Why do you follow Everything that is asked of you? Do you want to be accepted? If no one ever cares. Is life worth living? when your doing what your told Is this your life? or someone elses? Have you figured it out yet Cause All you gotta do is Look inbetween the lines Not completely my first shot at lyrics.. just the only one i kind of liked haha Last edited by TheCaster; 11-27-2007 at 11:52 AM.

11-24-2007, 11:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
Brock_West north american scum Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Texas Posts: 158	yeah it's really good __________________ http://www.icompositions.com/artists/Stockholm

11-24-2007, 12:30 AM	#2 (permalink)
~~under~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 1,056	i can see how a sense of pink floyd would fit into this. but there are some things that you emphasize that dont need emphasis. for example: Have you figured it out yet Cause All you gotta do is Look inbetween the lines -- there are words you dont emphasise that need emphasis Do you think you really love him? cause all he does is hate. Are you sure he only wants to kiss? or get in between the sheets its really good though.

11-24-2007, 07:22 AM	#3 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	hmm i see... thank ya

11-25-2007, 08:11 PM	#5 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	why thank you