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Old 01-29-2008, 11:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Neglect me like the spine of a gutted dog on a Chinese street.
As I lay dead, lifeless and limp, you must not stop,
Wither, whimper, stare or slouch.
Bend, break, cry or crouch.

Dear God, if you read, read of this humble dog.
He seeks not you, but Another.
(The palindrome is too ironic for his taste)
Too bad he can hardly taste anything anymore.
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Old 02-01-2008, 04:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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This is racist. If I were a mod, I'd take it down. :p
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Old 02-01-2008, 06:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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something pig destroyer would write
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Old 02-02-2008, 10:10 AM   #4 (permalink)
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But no comments for my other poems?!?
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Old 02-03-2008, 08:43 AM   #5 (permalink)
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You over loaded the first line and it left the rest feeling unbalanced.
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Old 02-03-2008, 03:19 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Yeah, I agree.
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