is it because ise black!]

I can give you my opinion if you want?

I can give you an opinion too. I don't mind..honestly.

shall I slam dunk him?
go on then.
But critique my serious songs.

See oojay calls me an ass and writes "****ty lyrics?"
He doesn't have much wit in the way he critiques my words does he?
Then you look at his views in slavery section and you get the idea he thinks he is a bit aggressive.

Well you're cool... just asking, because it seems like, you post a lot in here, and to me, respectively, it just seems like all your stuff has respectable grounds, but lacks a story, or substance, if you will. Man, I love commas... anyhow. What I do is stay with one piece for a while and develop it.

I think it's wonderful

So this song is not serious then?

No, if cliff sang it it would be but don't you laugh at cliffs christmas songs?
I am assuming if you have any nouce you do.
But what people make of the same thing is their choice.
For example if I hear whams club cococabana on holiday I piss myself as it is so stupidly and saccarine and funny but there are people who probably love pop idol who would love the song as a serious song.
You make of it what you will.

Then you don't have a problem with oojay's appraisal then?

This lacks pretty much everything positive.