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wow..really dude?? should probably kill yourself...i like coke and i dont mean fizzy?! wtf is THAT! thats not music, thats the work of a true moron.
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If you are serious about your lyrics, they need some work. Like maybe erasing the entire thing and starting over.
If youre not serious and just posting them for sh*ts and giggles then I digress to my original post. And for someone who despises pro wrestling so much you seem to know heaps about it:rolleyes: |
cheers man.
Peace to you too! |
That's a hot track yo. Werd.
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Wasn't bad, to me, but i really don't know much about rap, so...
i can see what the others are saying about the 'forced' rhyming, and, if you don't already have one, you might want to get a rhyming dictionary. Hey, and best of luck with getting your stuff sold! |
i didnt think it was that bad...needs some wobut its not as bad as everyones saying imo
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This track is still hot though. |
To be quite honest, I think that you're trying to joke around.
If you're serious, I think that everything before "Dizzy" needs to be removed from the rap. Start there. >.< |
creepy dreams
Daytime is useless but I still dream
Night time wonder with my minds clever scheme. For when I am sleeping the picture comes clear The other side of the world OR really quite near I win it all in the end and have things my way sway baby sweetheart, easy now sway Dawn breaks on a boring raining gray day travel- work -eat but hey baby hey Two more sleeps and maybe you know Dreams change the world They show us .......they show For I can win in the end My plan just takes time grow I drift off again I know girl I know:afro::drummer: Urban RT and Jackhammer This could be a love song or about west ham. Kind of David Grayish innit? !0th in the league with no money and a manager who speaks little English. Jealousy must reek from you all. |
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Shite poem btw. |
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