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Old 02-18-2009, 04:50 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Default sweet

youve made my life complete
the air i breathe is so sweet
your happiness is my one desire
my love for you is as hot as a fire

when we hold each other close
and kiss the night away
your the woman i love the most
im the happiest man alive today

your smile so beautiful your eyes are to
when your eyes meet mine just cant deny you
whats mine is yours what ever i can give
to show you i love you your my reason to live

my luvly my true love
angels carried you to me from above
as soon as i saw you it was meant to be
all my heavy burdens laid to rest
when you are close to me.:
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Old 02-18-2009, 05:34 AM   #12 (permalink)
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:couldnt tell you what it was, that first drawn me to you
may be it was all the love, i had and i was, waiting for someone like you
to come into my life, and to stay a while
the sound of that music, you were playing that day
your soft angelic voice drifted my way
remember sitting down overlooking the stage
knowing at once i had turned over a new page

i couldnt, quite bring myself to walk over to you,
even though i knew i had to ,before the night was through
couldnt let you leave without, giving you my name
address and number hoping you feel the same
oh how wonderful you made me feel ,that first kiss
got to tell you now, it was bliss
were still together even now shes always had a hold on me
my love for her is as strong now and forever it shall be.
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Old 02-18-2009, 04:34 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Default virus in my brain

]into the darkness where i dwell
i feel happier here at peace with myself
i took the bulb out so no accidents can happen
am i alone ,i dont feel alone.
in dead silence ,my head feels heavy and my eyes feel sore
i just cant bear to see anyone anymore.
when day breaks and the rays of light pierces through
i feel sad so terribly sad that im still here with you
i have to venture out today
not looking forward to it at all
wish i lived next door, to an offi
walkings a real bore, but first il have a coffee
not that it wakes me or its good for me in anyway
my eyes dont open much i hate the light of day
well il suffer in silence cus everyone thinks im fine
il treat myself with the words itl just take time
and well time i hate it, please take it away
dont bother me with your questions i cant answer none today
yeh ive been down the offi now ,i feel like a sleep.
im not one for self pity, for me it doesnt go down well
just need space to heal in this well built shell.
im facing it whats the worst that could happen
a head on collision what in my room well stranger things happen at sea.
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Old 02-19-2009, 04:06 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Default pastures of good sense

live a little gain a lot
go out and get what you havent got
wether you can buy, wether you cannot
dont say die,dont ever stop

believe in your self, live the dream
dont let them grind you down
if you can,leave! stop clowning around.

everything is possible nothing is denied
see what lifes like on the sunny side
if you can get their, with just a flip of the coin
then what you, staying for you stupid boy.

watch the tv, see other people fulfil there dreams
eat your potatoe chips drinking your gasoline
turn into a slob believing your not bothered
i know your secret its all uncovered.

dont be like your friends ignorant and unashamed
you cant really want to be just the same
when the ladder, falls at your feet climb it to the top
be a breathe of fresh air, lead them by example, dont stop.
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Old 02-19-2009, 05:20 AM   #15 (permalink)
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you;ve inspired me to join the circus...I thank you so much.

It's good.
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Old 02-20-2009, 11:49 AM   #16 (permalink)
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hey are you on drugs big-time? seriously, what the ****??!?!?!?!!
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Old 02-20-2009, 04:50 PM   #17 (permalink)
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wooow ur happy and inspiring today! thats new and interesting!
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Old 02-20-2009, 05:36 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Default i have vision do you agree?

[B]boredom getting me down ,nothing to do just hanging around
my friends seem to love this place
if i dont get out soon,il leave a head case
bordom giving me a hard time.this is not the place where my heart lies
trying to escape its getting harder by the hour
got to admit its not a passing shower.

bordom its killing my spirit, no longer can i live withit
my friends have noticed ive changed
thats good to know i guess cus im going away
its not like i dont like them anymore
my heads hurting to much head banging on the floor

boredom!staying, i could commit a terrible crime
suffer in silence, another teenage suicide.
i need an outlet and i cant find one here
its been good knowing you all,its my time to disappear

into the unknown i must follow my heart
both feet forward make a fresh start
none of you have the right to poke fun
even though all ties with you are now broken

boredom actually has opened new doors
im in a band im now on tour
see you later folks do as i do
stand on your own two feet and enjoy yourself to.
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Old 02-21-2009, 08:46 AM   #19 (permalink)
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your title is very martin luther king-y. as opposed to the rest of it. . .
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Old 02-21-2009, 10:39 AM   #20 (permalink)
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I really like it. I mean, the point of it, the tone, the mood. I relate, that is how I like to think. It seems more written like lyrics then a poem though.
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