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Old 02-19-2009, 04:06 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default pastures of good sense

live a little gain a lot
go out and get what you havent got
wether you can buy, wether you cannot
dont say die,dont ever stop

believe in your self, live the dream
dont let them grind you down
if you can,leave! stop clowning around.

everything is possible nothing is denied
see what lifes like on the sunny side
if you can get their, with just a flip of the coin
then what you, staying for you stupid boy.

watch the tv, see other people fulfil there dreams
eat your potatoe chips drinking your gasoline
turn into a slob believing your not bothered
i know your secret its all uncovered.

dont be like your friends ignorant and unashamed
you cant really want to be just the same
when the ladder, falls at your feet climb it to the top
be a breathe of fresh air, lead them by example, dont stop.
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Old 02-19-2009, 05:20 AM   #2 (permalink)
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you;ve inspired me to join the circus...I thank you so much.

It's good.
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Old 02-20-2009, 04:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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wooow ur happy and inspiring today! thats new and interesting!
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Old 02-21-2009, 10:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I really like it. I mean, the point of it, the tone, the mood. I relate, that is how I like to think. It seems more written like lyrics then a poem though.
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Old 01-20-2010, 02:24 PM   #5 (permalink)
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live a little gain a lot
go out and get what you havent got
wether you can buy, wether you cannot
dont say die,dont ever stop

believe in your self, live the dream
dont let them grind you down
if you can,leave! stop clowning around.

everything is possible nothing is denied
see what lifes like on the sunny side
if you can get their, with just a flip of the coin
then what you, staying for you stupid boy.

watch the tv, see other people fulfil there dreams
eat your potatoe chips drinking your gasoline
turn into a slob believing your not bothered
i know your secret its all uncovered.

dont be like your friends ignorant and unashamed
you cant really want to be just the same
when the ladder, falls at your feet climb it to the top
be a breathe of fresh air, lead them by example, dont stop.
That ones pretty decent, and the first one is okay, although the dance floor concept has been used before.
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Old 02-20-2009, 05:36 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Default i have vision do you agree?

[B]boredom getting me down ,nothing to do just hanging around
my friends seem to love this place
if i dont get out soon,il leave a head case
bordom giving me a hard time.this is not the place where my heart lies
trying to escape its getting harder by the hour
got to admit its not a passing shower.

bordom its killing my spirit, no longer can i live withit
my friends have noticed ive changed
thats good to know i guess cus im going away
its not like i dont like them anymore
my heads hurting to much head banging on the floor

boredom!staying, i could commit a terrible crime
suffer in silence, another teenage suicide.
i need an outlet and i cant find one here
its been good knowing you all,its my time to disappear

into the unknown i must follow my heart
both feet forward make a fresh start
none of you have the right to poke fun
even though all ties with you are now broken

boredom actually has opened new doors
im in a band im now on tour
see you later folks do as i do
stand on your own two feet and enjoy yourself to.
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Old 02-21-2009, 08:46 AM   #7 (permalink)
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your title is very martin luther king-y. as opposed to the rest of it. . .
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Old 02-22-2009, 10:49 AM   #8 (permalink)
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it was either that or see me when i pass you in the hallway.
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Old 06-08-2009, 02:20 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Under my pillow, where i sleep still
dreaming of the future, until i've had my fill
in a time of great confusion,
within the battered earth,
having a party, lts a new birth.end.

Unlocking imformation in the dream scape
hidden treasures inside my brain
all frustrations fall away
a third of our lives asleep, dreaming is here to stay.

I hear you crying, crying for your salvation
how do i reach it, how to save my soul
wonder around, in the dark to long,
you forget, the differences from right and wrong
and all goodness, has all but gone.

Ignition green, all ready to go
what you all waiting for.
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Old 07-30-2009, 09:47 AM   #10 (permalink)
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You are hurting me making me feel ill
spreading rumours cursing my name
what is it all for, i wonder why
do you think its just a game.
Your not on the receiving end,
so for that reason alone, i know your do it again.
Feel free to torture me, any time it suits you
i wont complaine i wont get angry, i only pity you.
Your never really know why i am the way i am,
you may aim to try but you will never understand.
You haven't the brain cells to work it out
you can only deceive for a short while before your found out.

chorus:
I won't waste my time, with you in mind
I have a life, its not a wasted life
It won't be a wasted journey, til the end of my days
I will accomplish all with my true face.

So with that in mind, you may carry on
doing what you want, behaving like a ****
Addressing everyone as a lower life form
acting suicidal in the eye of a storm.
There comes a time when you will have to face facts
and thats when life for you, will become flat.
There wont be any way out at all,
your be confronted with a wall.
No going through it or over the top,
thats when your life will eventually stop.
Darkness will fall upon you,
and laughter in the back ground from all the people you screwed.
Rest in peices for an eternity,
party going down in the under cities.
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