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Old 02-22-2009, 10:49 AM   #21 (permalink)
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it was either that or see me when i pass you in the hallway.
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Old 02-22-2009, 11:54 AM   #22 (permalink)
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Default licking dirt from the devils kettle

on the brink of madness
seeping slowly through the corridors of my mind
the catastrophic avents that mar our land
creating a whole language out of death
inviting the unsuspecting traveller
into the dephs of its bowels
and ripping each poor soul to shreds
by allowing the demons of this place
to have authority over man and beast
the savage links to our past have never been buried
and are still the fore front of every politition and leader
that appears on our tv screens and print
blood on the road of time insense of rotting flesh
diabolical power hungry individuals who play god
and are praised by the masses as saints
deliverers that bring light into our own personal darkness
shine the light on me for i still dont see!
i look at them and i feel ashamed to live side by side
with believers of the devil incarnate himself
wow what a revelation plz plz plz get a life
stop thinking that any man will save you
because its just not that simple.a child sometimes
can see what an adult cant, through an uncorrupt mind.
listen and learn if your not too far up the devils ass.
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Old 02-22-2009, 01:28 PM   #23 (permalink)
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cant help but feel out of touch
even though im with you all so much
my feelings are so different from yours
how can i, even the score.
you cant comprehend how much im hurting so
i pretend not to mind when you mysteriously go
when you return, the passion in me for you burns.

And its not like you dont care
you live in a different world your way out there.
i have tried to confront you without much success
so im writing this down il read it to you with finess
im not one for poetry or ser-an-ad-ing
but when you feel my love it always makes you sing.

So on that note il leave you to reside
to get things in perspective before you take the guy
its all or nothing i dont give my heart away for free
be my wife lets share our destiny.
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Old 02-22-2009, 02:29 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Its nice, but i notice that your stanzas in all your poems are very long and wordy. i suppose thats your way of writing, but i think it would look nicer to the reader if you shortened them more
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Old 02-22-2009, 02:42 PM   #25 (permalink)
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ok point taken wel see
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Old 02-23-2009, 06:48 AM   #26 (permalink)
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wave me goodbye
for im going away
do-nt you cry
your see me again one day
but for now il leave this with you
a little token that will comfort you
my gold chain
with a description on,
it means a lot to me
hope it helps you carry on.

when you leave
someone dear to your heart,
it causes real pain
when your apart,
i have to leave now
you new right from the start.

im all choked up
cant hide nothing from you
got to do a prison term
for a year or two
when ive done it
il be straight back to you.

if i had met you before
i wouldnt have done it at all
how i got caught it was comical
obviously im not laughing now

please dont visit
cant deal withit
but il write to you without fail
your the best thing thats ever happened to me
your love isnt for sale.
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Old 02-23-2009, 11:59 AM   #27 (permalink)
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routes ive taken yet have never spoken
the tales i could tell if promises are broken
hand shakes and deals that have made me a profit
in and out fast unlike those who copit

age comes wisdom well thats what they say
age is a constant reminder of who you are today
time has no consideration it has no predgedice
you can use and abuse but never escape it.

walk the path you have chosen
keep your head held high
dont get stamped on like an unwanted rodent
dont ever say die

keep what you got, keep a close eye on what you have not
stay ahead risky! be an achiever
theirs no need for greed, just sow them seeds
if you want whats mine gotta be a believer.

sitting on my beach with a pack of lager
the light of the moon streaming across the water
with my yaght anchored in the harbour
and a paid whore right beside yu

everyday is like a win at the races
what could be more enjoyable than that
yeh one day soon il be pushing up the daisys
heart attack cus im fat.
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Old 02-23-2009, 03:56 PM   #28 (permalink)
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going to town take in some sounds
take in some sights
see the big bright lights
everythings alright

going into town
goin to be around
take in a show
with a few friends you know

up goes the cheers
after a few beers
then down to the bar
pull out your marlin guitar
and stroke it with finess
put a stop sign on stress
gather round and be blessed
with jazz the very best.
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Old 02-23-2009, 07:06 PM   #29 (permalink)
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song or poem?

i dig it.
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Old 02-24-2009, 04:05 AM   #30 (permalink)
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both whet ever makes you happy.
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