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Old 11-26-2008, 03:10 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Is it first person perspective or third person?
Haha, exactly what I was asking. It's kinda hard to write when you don't know these things!
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Old 11-26-2008, 04:17 PM   #32 (permalink)
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Perspective= The Turtles half penguin lover.
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Old 11-26-2008, 04:56 PM   #33 (permalink)
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I thought we were writing about a tortoise that raced a hare but the hair didn't take breaks, so he won, but then got drunk and passed out at an after-party and the tortoise suffocated him with a pillow.
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Old 11-26-2008, 11:56 PM   #34 (permalink)
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Actually I think it's the turtle who wins..
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Old 11-27-2008, 07:57 AM   #35 (permalink)
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Old 01-04-2009, 06:18 PM   #36 (permalink)
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first post BTW love the site, will be coming back,

As Usain lined up Hawking for a hundred meter dash,
The turtle was already eying up the winners sash
The turtle dreamed the prize was his, his eyes transfixed on gold
Jamaicas heart was racing, the race already his.

He presumed


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Old 01-12-2009, 06:43 AM   #37 (permalink)
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ok i get it. i got the opening line.
i met a turtle in a bar one fiday night.
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Old 01-13-2009, 11:45 PM   #38 (permalink)
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Don't know his name. Got No reply.

(Okay so Sylable format is 12 then 8 for verses)
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