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Killertu 01-05-2009 01:12 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by jackhammer (Post 573739)
It's Intelligence-not Intelligent....

Well english have alot of different meaning:stupid:

jackhammer 01-05-2009 01:22 PM
No I am pointing out that you used the wrong word which is quite ironic given the statement you wrote.

josh.averes 01-05-2009 02:10 PM
the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.

Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.

Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.

It's good though.

Killertu 01-05-2009 04:15 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by josh.averes (Post 573854)
the love song is 17 seconds long, and it makes no sense.
sorry.

Also, I don't think intelligence will have anything to do with people not understanding your love song.
Just the fact that it does not make sense in the state that it is now.

Add an 's' every now and then and maybe don't refer to something as the 'who' and it will make you a million bucks.

It's good though.
Urmm if u asking....I did say this is a PART ....not the whole song,all I needed is asking for this part to see if is good, if that what u saying up there about 17 second

josh.averes 01-05-2009 04:33 PM
no it's not good. sorry. it is not correct

anticipation 01-05-2009 04:46 PM
does title?

Janszoon 01-05-2009 04:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by anticipation (Post 573948)
does title?
:laughing:

josh.averes 01-05-2009 06:27 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by anticipation (Post 573948)
does title?
:laughing: oops. pissed myself

FireInCairo 01-05-2009 06:30 PM
"does song needed to make sense?"

Is this a joke?

Janszoon 01-05-2009 06:32 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by FireInCairo (Post 574021)
"does song needed to make sense?"

Is this a joke?
Does joke needed to make sense?


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