Killertu's Songwriting Journal
 

well I'm here to get on a new hobbies as in singging and lyrics writing,I wrote many other parody but this one is my best so far,It a parody of take on me(I don't even know what to call as title for my parody yet)so check out and what u think:hphones:.

Dreaming all day
Seeing you a magical place
Love you everyday
Tonight I’m talking all about you
Pleasure all day
Using hand that all I needed

Take it off
Get on top
Just don’t stop
Orgasm

Just see you today
You hot and all but that who
Hard on at you
Never gonna get you but can’t do
Just say any
I know I like it when I’m playing you

Up and down
Side to side
Open wide
I’m coming

I love you all day
Remember you or I can’t say
Dream you O.K
You just a girl I can play with myself
Lying all day
You will get your love any day

Get it on
by myself
Light upon
Dream to you


The song basicaly about a guy dreamming with a girl but he can't get her so he have a me time if u know what I mean(TRUE STORY)

Its More Than A Feeling

GOt to love Boston hey hey

COm'on can someone atleast tell me something

Wifey Boozer would like this.

As for your question, I think it's a decent parody. The masturbation references on the last chorus are well played, but I'm not sure if they would fit in with the music.

Better than I could do though.

WHat would u mean by fit the music???

"Get it on
by myself
Light upon
Dream to you"

I can't picture Aha singing that.

Well it a parody....why would they sing that,Infact they wouldn't even see this :finger:

Does song needed to make sense???
 

Well I'm a song writer and I just wrote this beautiful new love song but...here the thing.....I don't think people with less intelligent(no offense:usehead:)know what it mean,even i don't really get it the first time I wrote this but check it out if you knowwhat i'm saying.


IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think???

PS:I just update a new part!,is till a draft BTW(I knwo I know...it chessy,the old part are color gray.)

It's Intelligence-not Intelligent....