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Old 12-29-2008, 11:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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well I'm here to get on a new hobbies as in singging and lyrics writing,I wrote many other parody but this one is my best so far,It a parody of take on me(I don't even know what to call as title for my parody yet)so check out and what u think.

Dreaming all day
Seeing you a magical place
Love you everyday
Tonight I’m talking all about you
Pleasure all day
Using hand that all I needed

Take it off
Get on top
Just don’t stop
Orgasm

Just see you today
You hot and all but that who
Hard on at you
Never gonna get you but can’t do
Just say any
I know I like it when I’m playing you

Up and down
Side to side
Open wide
I’m coming

I love you all day
Remember you or I can’t say
Dream you O.K
You just a girl I can play with myself
Lying all day
You will get your love any day

Get it on
by myself
Light upon
Dream to you


The song basicaly about a guy dreamming with a girl but he can't get her so he have a me time if u know what I mean(TRUE STORY)
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Old 12-29-2008, 11:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-30-2008, 12:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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GOt to love Boston hey hey
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Old 12-31-2008, 11:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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COm'on can someone atleast tell me something
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Old 01-01-2009, 12:00 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Wifey Boozer would like this.

As for your question, I think it's a decent parody. The masturbation references on the last chorus are well played, but I'm not sure if they would fit in with the music.

Better than I could do though.
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Old 01-01-2009, 01:18 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Wifey Boozer would like this.

As for your question, I think it's a decent parody. The masturbation references on the last chorus are well played, but I'm not sure if they would fit in with the music.

Better than I could do though.

WHat would u mean by fit the music???
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Old 01-01-2009, 01:46 PM   #7 (permalink)
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"Get it on
by myself
Light upon
Dream to you"

I can't picture Aha singing that.
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Old 01-01-2009, 07:33 PM   #8 (permalink)
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"Get it on
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Light upon
Dream to you"

I can't picture Aha singing that.
Well it a parody....why would they sing that,Infact they wouldn't even see this
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Old 01-05-2009, 08:23 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Well I'm a song writer and I just wrote this beautiful new love song but...here the thing.....I don't think people with less intelligent(no offense)know what it mean,even i don't really get it the first time I wrote this but check it out if you knowwhat i'm saying.

You,the apple of my eye
You,the first love of my sight
You,the sould mate in my mind
Is only you
and only you

Who,the one by your side
who,will fight for your right
who,the love of my eye
is only you
and only you

Is you,to who I come true
Is you,that make me the who
Is you,and only you
To make me,someone for you

IT mostly the first sentence,but what u think???

PS:I just update a new part!,is till a draft BTW(I knwo I know...it chessy,the old part are color gray.)
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Old 01-05-2009, 08:41 AM   #10 (permalink)
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It's Intelligence-not Intelligent....
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