Review My Catchy Pop/Acoustic/Indie Song? (lyrics, myspace, shows)

Mike Smith · 01-21-2009, 06:35 PM

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Originally Posted by yoboe

haha

So do you like my song too?

Wifey Boozer · 01-22-2009, 05:53 AM

I don't know if you're being stupid or cute. But it's not cute and you're coming across real stupid.

yoboe · 01-22-2009, 12:42 PM

chiillll

Mike Smith · 01-22-2009, 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by yoboe

chiillll

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Originally Posted by Wifey Boozer

I don't know if you're being stupid or cute. But it's not cute and you're coming across real stupid.

Who were you talking to wifey?

Me or yoboe?

Cause i wasnt meaning you when i said that whole thing about not having a life, because you said nothing rude to me

Double X · 01-22-2009, 03:38 PM

Why is your goal to make something cliched? This might have been a filler song 40 years ago...but now...

~~The Unfan~~ · 01-22-2009, 03:40 PM

lol @ vocals on myspace page.

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Originally Posted by Double X

Why is your goal to make something cliched?

Who makes music because they believe in it? As a fellow musician I can honestly say that there is a thing known as business. Perhaps you should study it. Rumor has it that if you're good at making music with no soul that you can be cool and get mad bitches.

Wifey Boozer · 01-22-2009, 04:27 PM

I hate people.

Mike Smith · 01-22-2009, 04:56 PM

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Originally Posted by The Unfan

lol @ vocals on myspace page.
Who makes music because they believe in it? As a fellow musician I can honestly say that there is a thing known as business. Perhaps you should study it. Rumor has it that if you're good at making music with no soul that you can be cool and get mad bitches.

lol yes i realize my vocals arent sounding so good on the myspace page...But thats why they're called ROUGH DEMOS

They're not studio recorded, not even recorded professionally

And they're unmixed and unmastered so they sound crappy compared to a mixed/mastered version i could do eventually.

Anyways i make music because i believe in it, just because i wrote one cliche song doesnt mean my other ones dont have meaning.

I've written songs about war, the election, suicide prevention, domestic abuse, love gone awry and much more

So my songs have much heart poured into them

So please dont think im some ass just looking to make a quick buck somehow

WWWP · 01-22-2009, 05:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Mike Smith

So please dont think im some ass just looking to make a quick buck somehow

Oh, why would anyone think that?

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Originally Posted by Mike Smith

haha it may be a bit cliche

but songs like these sell to record labels and managers when searching =]

mr dave · 01-22-2009, 05:24 PM

gotta say i love the irony of seeing lyrics to a song that would have totally fit as some hippie love song in the 60s being slammed because it goes against some BS hippie ideal about integrity being directly proportionate to the individual's disdain for the established mainstream.

01-22-2009, 05:53 AM	#22 (permalink)
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yoboe Groupie Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: C-TOWN Posts: 19	chiillll

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Double X sleepe Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: boston Posts: 1,140	Why is your goal to make something cliched? This might have been a filler song 40 years ago...but now...