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Old 05-04-2009, 10:09 AM   #61 (permalink)
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is this from Hawthorne heights?

but really, i don't get it...



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Old 05-08-2009, 07:25 AM   #62 (permalink)
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Default Taken away

The little boy lays there in his bed.
He can't wait for tommrow.
He's got new toys and
He is anxious to play.

Why can't we live like this was yesterday
Live with no fears or worries
Staying on the floor
And our only work is playing with toys
We live to much for tommrow
And forget what we have today
If we could get through all of these struggles
We would see that there really is a way.
So until then I sit and wonder.
What will happen today?

The little boy lays awake and he wonders
Were did she go.
In this world he is alone
All he hears is the wind blow
He wishes he would have listened
But now everything is gone

They were'nt there for very long
It was just a little get together
The boy drank a little too much
And got into the car
This girl pleads with him not do it
But he tells her its okay

5 minutes down the road.
He runs a stop sign and
Hits a telephone pole
The girl then grows silent and dies

We live to much for tommrow and
Don't realize what we have today
We need to stop and look
Or it could all be taken away




This is just a little song that I wrote just now. Comment what you think about it.


What this song is about: Stop and breath, take in what you have becasue it could all be taken away in 1 instant , with one bad decission. your whoel world could be gone.
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Old 05-08-2009, 07:30 AM   #63 (permalink)
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Default When your gone.

When your gone.
I'll be right there.
By your side.
no one can rtake you from me.
Not in this life.

I'll always be by your side.
In life and death.
Everytime I see you
I lose my breath.

I never knew.
That I could be with you.
through all of this bad and all of this good.
you've been with me.
I could never ask for anyone new.
Those eyes are so pretty and blue.
I can't dream of one day without you.






Just a short little song I wrote. It isnt very good. but there it is.
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Old 05-08-2009, 07:54 AM   #64 (permalink)
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Default Best rap lyrics ever.

(feat. Eminem)
[Intro: Tupac]
So what I wanna do, hopefully is... I wanna be, uhm not a wannabe I am Tupac Shakur!

Tupac!
2005!
Guess who's back? G-G-Guess who's back
G-G-Guess who's back? G-G-Guess who's back
Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

[Verse 1: Tupac]
Posse deep as I role through the streets
Mother**** the police as we creep, in our Jeeps
Layin so long you think I'm asleep
But at the slightest beef, I'm robbin niggaz through the teeth
And OPD can get the **** if they play tuffy
Last time them niggaz rushed me, I aint bust but now I'm touchy
Trust me, aint nothing jumpin but these buck shots
Them niggaz got enough knots, I'm poppin corrupt cops
Ya mother****az catch a hot one
You wanted to start a problem, now you coward cops have got one
And there's no prison that can hold a
Mother****in soulja, ready to role and take control
So now I jack 'em while they sleepin
Role to the door, through a grenade in the precinct
Some people panic, brothers bugged out
I had to keep poppin, cuz wouldn't stop until they rugged out
And they vest don't protect from the head wounds
Reload ammunitions and them bitches will be dead soon
Smoke rising from the barrel of my shotty
I finally got revenge, now count the bodies
20 cops, one for every year in jail
Tryin to keep a nigga down, but ya failed
Before I let ya take me, I told ya
**** being trapped, I'm a soulja

[Chorus: Eminem]
I betcha that I got something you aint got, that's called courage
It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just frontin
You aint?

[Verse 2: Tupac]
It's Tupac in the mad bitch
In them six-'fo, rag on them thangs, that's a bad bitch
Gettin ghosts on them bitches in the town
Bustin out the backseat, nigga when we clown
Homie is you down?
B got the strap and she anxious
Hurry up 'fo she spank ****
Commin round the corners, spittin rounds
They payin homie down
Caught them sucka ass bitches outta bounce
Now tell me how that sound?
A double date laced with hate, make 'em pray for the judgement day
Now tell me how that sound?
A double date laced with hate, make 'em pray for the judgement day
Stinkin BIATCH!

[Chorus: Eminem]
I betcha that I got something you aint got, that's called courage
It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just frontin
You aint? (Tupac)

[Outro: Tupac]
Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me

Everywhere I see, a soulja a soulja
Everywhere I see, a soulja like me
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Old 05-08-2009, 10:24 PM   #65 (permalink)
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Fix the grammatical errors.
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Fix the grammatical errors.
or,
fix the error in which you decided to type out a song and post it on musicbanter
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Old 05-09-2009, 12:47 PM   #67 (permalink)
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Or that.
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...are you fucking serious...
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Old 05-14-2009, 11:40 PM   #69 (permalink)
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Cliche, cliche.
It's a start, I mean I starting by basically writing cliche's every single line, but just try to stray away a little.
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Old 05-14-2009, 11:43 PM   #70 (permalink)
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...
no.
Maybe if the Tupac part had some substance and it didn't sound like he was mocking soulja boy...
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