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Old 07-27-2009, 08:08 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Jim Colyer View Post
I was 17 when I wrote my first song. It seems that everyone's first songs are about broken romance. Mine were.
My first song was about getting into romance, which is probably better than getting apart from romance, but I've gotta say it's not original. I've seen so many songs with the same theme, and I just am not interested in these songs any more. The verses are nice, but I don't even know how you could make a great melody off of the chorus.

I'm not saying this song is bad, it's just not unique.
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Old 07-28-2009, 06:23 PM   #12 (permalink)
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I agree with Drummerguy360, I'd probably advise you to diversify your lyrics man. But, who knows, you could've already done that and just not posted it yet.
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