This Poem Is Probably Going To Go Over Your Head..

bogey_j · 12-11-2009, 02:20 AM

but here goes. it's lyrics for an experimental song i'm writing. it's called 'Do fish dream?'
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My friend is a fish
he lives in my room.
his fin is a cloud.
he sees me when I sleep

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Schizotypic · 12-11-2009, 02:34 AM

Is this a poem or is it a riddle?

mr dave · 12-11-2009, 02:07 PM

people are going to think you're singing about this

bogey_j · 12-11-2009, 02:35 PM

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Originally Posted by mr dave

people are going to think you're singing about this

then they would be wrong

**Janszoon** · 12-11-2009, 02:41 PM

I think the song is about tennis.

mr dave · 12-11-2009, 05:54 PM

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Originally Posted by bogey_j

then they would be wrong

wrong or not it's the audience and not the artist that determines what creations are really about.

bogey_j · 12-11-2009, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mr dave

wrong or not it's the audience and not the artist that determines what creations are really about.

I understand that, but you must be some jesus freak if the only thing you got from the lyrics was jesus

**Janszoon** · 12-11-2009, 06:50 PM

So what is it about?

bogey_j · 12-11-2009, 07:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Janszoon

So what is it about?

I wrote it about my pet fish named carl

HotFunkColdPunk · 12-11-2009, 07:37 PM

hehe That's deep.

Is there more to it?

12-11-2009, 02:20 AM	#1 (permalink)
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HotFunkColdPunk Groupie Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 21	hehe That's deep. Is there more to it? __________________ "Well behaved women rarely make history."

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