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Old 04-13-2010, 07:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I'll post my lyrics in here. Please be honest and tell me what I can change and if you like or dislike them.
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Old 04-14-2010, 06:59 AM   #2 (permalink)
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(Verse 1)
So what’s it gonna take
To get me out of this place
I can’t really do this I need my own space
I can’t do it how you want I need to go at my own pace
We treat life like it’s a race
But what’s at the end?
Will it be better?
Will it be worse?
I need to go forward
But my life’s stuck in reverse

(Chorus)
So what’s it gonna take?
For it to be like it used to be
So what’s it gonna take?
To pick you up off this floor
So what’s it gonna to take?
Don’t let me down don’t shut the door

(Verse 2)
You were all that I had
I didn’t know that our life was so bad
Now you sit in front of me
And lie through your teeth
Why can’t you tell me the truth?
I thought we had unconditional trust
I can tell you anything why can’t you
I feel betrayed when you don’t come home
I feel hated when you continue to do things that hurt us

(Chorus)
So what’s it gonna take?
For it to be like it used to be
So what’s it gonna take?
To pick you up off this floor
So what’s it gonna to take?
Don’t let me down don’t shut the door

(Verse 3)
I understand that some things are more important than others
But tell me what’s more important than family
I can’t take this anymore
I can’t take seeing you like this
I can’t take living like this

So what’s it gonna take?
For it to be like it used to
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(Verse One)
I got this girl
That I met up in Ohio
And her golden smile
Brings her home to me
I know we are meant to be
I just want her to see
That I don’t mean to hurt her
I know my actions
Make her feel like I will desert her

(Pre-Chorus)
But I’d do anything
To show her how I really feel ({scream} How I feel)
I hope she knows
That my love is for real ({scream} This love is for real)
Come on, Come on

(Chorus)
Her angel eyes
My clever disguise
I’m trying all that I can to hold on
She’s so sweet
She’s all that I need
It’s taking all that I have to hold on
Nothing they say
Can ever take her from me
Come on, Come on

(Verse Two)
I feel dead when she’s gone
I fail every time we don’t get along
But through all of this I can’t leave
She’s like my greatest disease
But the feeling I get when we are together
I want to be with her forever

(Pre-Chorus)
But I’d do anything
To show her how I really feel
({Scream} How I feel)
I hope she knows
That my love is for real
({Scream} This love is for real)
Come on, Come on

(Verse 3)
We are like partners in crime
We have fun all of the time
We hit them where it hurts
We’re all about fun we don’t work
Come on, Come on
Her shining smile, her stunning style
Her tender kiss, Her wonderful bliss
Keeps me coming back for more

(Chorus)
Her angel eyes
My clever disguise
I’m trying all that I can to hold on
She’s so sweet
She’s all that I need
It’s taking all that I have to hold on
Nothing they say
Can ever take her from me
Come on, Come on

(Verse 4 {ending})
Come on, Come on
Her shining smile, her stunning style
({Scream} I want to be with her forever)
Come on, come on
Her tender kiss, Her wonderful bliss
({Scream} I can’t be without her)
Keeps me coming back for more
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