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Old 07-26-2010, 05:43 AM   #11 (permalink)
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wow good song
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Old 07-26-2010, 09:20 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Old 07-26-2010, 08:13 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Default You Know I Would

New song. First song I made that seems long and good hahah. Anyway it's called You Know I Would.

intro-
4x

verse-
It's been so long now, I can barely remember the time
The time you told me, you needed me
Like a twister, everything went outta control
I lost you, I lost my soul
Walking around town after all these years
Seeing old places, seeing the old theater
I watch as the earth grows so much stronger
While I, grow so much weaker
Why I left this place is far beyond me
It's like waking up and forgetting the dream

Chorus-
If I could get it all back in one quick fast shot you know I would, you know I would
If I could remember the times I spent with you, you know I would, you know I would
It seems my skeletons are breaking out of the closet, and looking for the man who created all of this, all of this

verse-
Thinking all of these problems were so far away
Whole time it was so close to me
Keeping my mind set on unimportant things
While all along I was breaking
So many good times on 34 th street
But nothing about you and me
Trying to make sense of the fiction in my head
Walking down the road of the abandoned
Time will tell they say, But time just marks my body
All these memories, just hide themselves away from me

chorus-2x

ending verse-

I'm falling down
No more ground
In my own grave
Much bigger then me
Memories fade
No one can save me
and If you came back
You wouldn't want me to survive this death trap
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Old 07-27-2010, 04:39 PM   #14 (permalink)
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wow that is deep, I loved it instantly, Good work!!!
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Old 07-27-2010, 04:45 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Thank you!! I'm not the kind of person who makes long songs but this song was one that was catchy to the ear when I played it haha and thanks again for checking my youtube channel out
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Old 07-27-2010, 05:40 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Thank you!! I'm not the kind of person who makes long songs but this song was one that was catchy to the ear when I played it haha and thanks again for checking my youtube channel out

I know how you feel ha and no prob!!
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Old 07-28-2010, 11:47 AM   #17 (permalink)
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Oldschool Punk song I wrote awhile ago, it's fast and sweet like punk should be. Title is medicine



Breaking things into words
I'm not going to be bothered
I heard my medicine arrived
Shutting down for tonight

Chorus-
I don't need help
Just a place to sleep
I don't need help
Just a place to eat
I don't need help
I just need a fix

Right now, I feel so tired
Why be bothered at 2pm
I'm up when they stop knockin
I'll be out before next month

chorus-

verse chords 2x

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Old 07-31-2010, 12:17 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Very original! Great work!
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Old 07-31-2010, 09:35 PM   #19 (permalink)
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thank you very much haha
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Old 07-31-2010, 10:32 PM   #20 (permalink)
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song is route 66, lyrics may not make sense do to the album i want to record this with tells a story and this is a piece. But w/e. here it is:


-Intro-

-verse-
Jimmy where your traveling
You won't find any fortune
Jimmy where your going
Is leading you to a end, of trust


-Chorus-
Catch me on route 66, lot of demons lot of pricks
Catch me on route 66, lot of lies on the left side

-Fill-

-verse 2-
When will you find the
key to your inner self?
Why doesn't somebody
Just come to heal, your soul


-Chorus-
-chorus no instruments-
-chorus-2x

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