Dirty's Lyrics and Songs

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 01-05-2011, 02:13 PM

I did it in Mixcraft. What do you want to tweak? I can do it for ya.

TheRavenEffect · 01-06-2011, 12:58 PM

can you make the sample you used for the chorus louder and cleaner? and on the 2nd and 3rd chrouses can you run the sample twice so its "there goes my gun"... "there goes my gun".... make it 8 bars 16 bars whatever you want. The first chorus is fine though cause my second verse comes in real fast after my first verse

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 01-06-2011, 01:02 PM

k, I'll get back to you in a couple of days with the updated version.

~~Dirty~~ · 01-07-2011, 01:26 AM

My partner in rhyme, Nasty N8 finally hit the studio again. Different style than me but check it out.

The last three letters are censored by MB so u gotta add the "g" to the end of the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOa7BhGeFA g

Bloozcrooz · 01-07-2011, 01:35 AM

Good work..Lot of feeling in the Hollow song. I can relate in a lot of ways. Nice lyrics!! Keep up the good work

~~Dirty~~ · 01-07-2011, 10:20 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Boozinbloozin

Good work..Lot of feeling in the Hollow song. I can relate in a lot of ways. Nice lyrics!! Keep up the good work

Thanks dude.

Writing new stuff now. Planning to record late February and have a new mixtape completely done by mid-March. This one won't be quite as many songs and will be a little different.

Please drop me any suggestions for songs or suggestions for mixtape title.

TheRavenEffect · 01-07-2011, 06:17 PM

You sound like Jimmy Pop. Which would be ill if you weren't trying to sound hard... cause the two just do not mix at all. Lyrics and flow ideas are pretty nice though I judged you too harsh at first. You just don't sound like a rapper. That's what I was trying to say before and sorry if this comes across as hate but I just figured out how to put into words exactly how I felt about your sh!t so i figured I'd respectfully tell ya

~~Dirty~~ · 01-07-2011, 06:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TheRavenEffect

You sound like Jimmy Pop. Which would be ill if you weren't trying to sound hard... cause the two just do not mix at all. Lyrics and flow ideas are pretty nice though I judged you too harsh at first. You just don't sound like a rapper. That's what I was trying to say before and sorry if this comes across as hate but I just figured out how to put into words exactly how I felt about your sh!t so i figured I'd respectfully tell ya

Thanks. I got the message before though. You already said basically the same thing two pages ago. I'll repeat that I sound how I want to sound and like my voice. Delivery and flow are already really good and these new songs I'm writing only take it to another level.

TheRavenEffect · 01-08-2011, 01:09 PM

Well I may not like the voice but I guess I gotta respect your confidence. What's good with this collab?

~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ · 01-08-2011, 06:14 PM

I want to start my verse with this line (preferably coming in right after Dirty)

"Yeah, Dirty, you heard me. Don't know 'bout 27, but I aint kickin' past 30.
Here to burn out quick while you fade away, mind get's sick while my body stays the same."

01-06-2011, 12:58 PM	#72 (permalink)
TheRavenEffect Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: The Dreamworld Posts: 62	can you make the sample you used for the chorus louder and cleaner? and on the 2nd and 3rd chrouses can you run the sample twice so its "there goes my gun"... "there goes my gun".... make it 8 bars 16 bars whatever you want. The first chorus is fine though cause my second verse comes in real fast after my first verse __________________ "I want to be one of those people, be they writers, poets, musicians, who leaves clues for the next generation. The really good people leave clues that help feed the human race. That's my aspiration." -Julian Casablancas

01-07-2011, 06:17 PM	#77 (permalink)
TheRavenEffect Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: The Dreamworld Posts: 62	You sound like Jimmy Pop. Which would be ill if you weren't trying to sound hard... cause the two just do not mix at all. Lyrics and flow ideas are pretty nice though I judged you too harsh at first. You just don't sound like a rapper. That's what I was trying to say before and sorry if this comes across as hate but I just figured out how to put into words exactly how I felt about your sh!t so i figured I'd respectfully tell ya __________________ "I want to be one of those people, be they writers, poets, musicians, who leaves clues for the next generation. The really good people leave clues that help feed the human race. That's my aspiration." -Julian Casablancas

01-08-2011, 01:09 PM	#79 (permalink)
TheRavenEffect Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: The Dreamworld Posts: 62	Well I may not like the voice but I guess I gotta respect your confidence. What's good with this collab? __________________ "I want to be one of those people, be they writers, poets, musicians, who leaves clues for the next generation. The really good people leave clues that help feed the human race. That's my aspiration." -Julian Casablancas

01-05-2011, 02:13 PM	#71 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	I did it in Mixcraft. What do you want to tweak? I can do it for ya.

01-06-2011, 01:02 PM	#73 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	k, I'll get back to you in a couple of days with the updated version.

01-07-2011, 01:26 AM	#74 (permalink)
~~Dirty~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Oct 2010 Location: USA Posts: 981	My partner in rhyme, Nasty N8 finally hit the studio again. Different style than me but check it out. The last three letters are censored by MB so u gotta add the "g" to the end of the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOa7BhGeFA g

01-07-2011, 01:35 AM	#75 (permalink)
Bloozcrooz Justifiable Idiocracy Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Texas Posts: 1,244	Good work..Lot of feeling in the Hollow song. I can relate in a lot of ways. Nice lyrics!! Keep up the good work

01-08-2011, 06:14 PM	#80 (permalink)
~~someonecompletelyrandom~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 4,538	I want to start my verse with this line (preferably coming in right after Dirty) "Yeah, Dirty, you heard me. Don't know 'bout 27, but I aint kickin' past 30. Here to burn out quick while you fade away, mind get's sick while my body stays the same."