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Old 06-11-2018, 10:56 AM   #81 (permalink)
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Thanx for the constructive criticism. It’s always welcomed and appreciated. The insults, not so much
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Old 06-11-2018, 12:06 PM   #82 (permalink)
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Sorry

If it's any consolation, I know nothing about poetry.
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Old 10-08-2018, 08:51 PM   #83 (permalink)
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I think they're good! I think it would help to add metaphor to some though, not gonna lie
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