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Old 11-17-2025, 02:04 PM   #91 (permalink)
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Listen to How this ends.mp3 by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/373SFZ1D5llOWI7HGb

"How this ends". New song about my wife's conviction to go to any lengths to protect our oldest daughter
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Old 11-17-2025, 02:07 PM   #92 (permalink)
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Listen to All fall down.mp3 by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/SmniGOojB0d8GlAI2c

"All fall down". A dire warning not to mess with our youngest daughter, as she might give you more problems than her mother
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Old 11-17-2025, 02:09 PM   #93 (permalink)
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Listen to I need you.mp3 by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/xJXejXk0gVeaALf3hP

New song "I need you". Written for my wife.
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Old 11-17-2025, 02:10 PM   #94 (permalink)
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Listen to Dont lose faith in me.mp3 by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/LhR09AmeEavSruCG0C

New song "don't lose faith in me". Written for my wife
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Old 11-17-2025, 02:12 PM   #95 (permalink)
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Let me know what you think. Had nearly 1000 hits since I've asked for feedback and not a peep. Any feedback would be really appreciated
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Old 11-20-2025, 12:21 PM   #96 (permalink)
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Listen to Forcefield.mp3 by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/yvelmMjB00BfwKAp6S
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Old 11-20-2025, 12:22 PM   #97 (permalink)
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Listen to Test of time.mp3 by James Kennedy on #SoundCloud
https://on.soundcloud.com/YNU9c0meK7hZWY20yP
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Old 11-21-2025, 01:42 PM   #98 (permalink)
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There used to be but people stopped responding. You can change that. Come at me
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Old 11-21-2025, 04:37 PM   #99 (permalink)
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A lot of the battles that people posted got deleted later by the people that posted them. So for a lot of it I appear to be responding to nothing. Shame cos they were pretty good
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