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I wanted to find someone skilled to battle and I knew it was a long shot,
Then up steps Doctor John Rock who thought he had a strong cock,
But it's gone soft.
Talking about background music? Bro you picked the wrong spot,
Now you just better hope I don't catch you before you succumb to the bum rot.
You know, the same type your mums got.
What kind of doctor are you? My guess is a butt doc,
I only say that cos I heard your f.uck box has been stuffed lots,
Sharing sweets to build some trust with tots,
Hoping to get sucked off, but seriously that shi.t must stop.
You heard of buck shot? Cos my guns cocked,
You've had more mass ejections than f.ucking sun spots

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https://on.soundcloud.com/OQJOc2Ocb793uUJdXE

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https://on.soundcloud.com/Uy9EqRStvtQjNPZ2EK

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Put some of my lyrics in an AI generator. Have a listen and let me know if you like it

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https://on.soundcloud.com/qLpFwO2OiOftZtC3J3

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http://on.soundcloud.com/ANpAY52SI5VvDp2wP2

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I need advice. The top link I posted above is Honey. I wrote that during a difficult period for my wife. Writing it helped me at the time. Please listen to it and let me know of you think she would like it if I gave it to her. Half of me thinks she would love it and the other half thinks she would think I was calling her weak or crazy (which she's not). Would really appreciate insight from women here.

Plus please tell me if you like the song. I think it's great but maybe I'm biased.

Thanks

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Any insight or opinions on "Honey" would really be greatly appreciated. Please help!

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https://on.soundcloud.com/6mn8Ap06Mwmpvgvai1

My new song "Still my moon and stars"

Let me know what you think (please)

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Do you remember Tenerife kim
At nineteen you were so free and such a sweet thing
Smiles came as easily to you as breathing
But somewhere along the road it started leaking,
My soul lies weakened, each time I see you weeping
So I'm Pleading, trying to stop my sweet Kim from leaving
But still when you smile how ever fleeting
My lonely heart returns to beating

Then suddenly I'm back with that girl with the sweetest smile
Standing on a beach stretching for miles and miles
Still young with golden tans and hopes and plans
Holding hands at peace walking on Molten sands
That pretty young thing is still what I see
Each time I look at you my sweet Kimberley

You're still my moon and stars

You're still my moon and stars

If ever you don't remember exactly who you are

You'll see it in my eyes cos you're my moon and stars

How did we ever get to this Kim?
Stood together same as ever but there's a distance
On the surface it looks the same but somehow twisted
I know you want to let me in so stop resisting.
But every now and then I still slip through the cracks
Trying to make you laugh and help you to relax
When it works it's like reuniting with my sweetest friend
And for a brief moment I have you back with me again

Then suddenly I'm back with that girl with the sweetest smile
Standing on a beach stretching for miles and miles
Still young with golden tans and hopes and plans
Holding hands at peace walking on Molten sands
That pretty young thing is still what I see
Each time I look at you my sweet Kimberley

You're still my moon and stars

You're still my moon and stars

If ever you don't remember exactly who you are

You'll see it in my eyes cos you're my moon and stars