New orginal song i want yall to hear (lyrics, effect)

[shawn pierce]

I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "

[shawn pierce]

I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?

[pheurton]

Reminds me of Phil Collins.

[mr dave]

i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary?

you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics.

i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd
i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were
everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out?

[shawn pierce]

At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.

[shawn pierce]

oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......

[mr dave]

4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her....

[Urban Hat€monger ?]

And I thought you said it was NEW

[Comus]

False advertising

[TheCaster]

welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea
hey, at least its causing a significant effect

the high *ting* the drums are playing is annoying
the guitar is bland and boring
the voice is nails on a chalk board