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Old 04-07-2008, 07:49 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default New orginal song i want yall to hear

I wrote this song after i caught my ex-wife in bed with another man. I think all people who had a realtionship go bad could relate. It is recorded live so the vedio just has the lyrics with a couple of pics in it. What yall think??

look on youtube for " rcstyx the songs name is cry "


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Old 04-07-2008, 07:52 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I can upload the url for it since i am new here but maybe someone else can make the link?
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Old 04-07-2008, 12:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Reminds me of Phil Collins.
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Old 04-07-2008, 01:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i'm hoping the upload date of april 1st is indicative of this song's true intentions. otherwise what's the real point? to prove you're over her by singing about her for 4 minutes longer than necessary?

you should also get someone to proofread your lyrics.

i took for granted that you be around - you should be you'd
i thought your feet was planted on the ground - feet is plural, was is singular, should be were
everybody has their mistakes that they make - so she was predestined to sleep around? the mistake already existed it only had to play itself out?
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Old 04-07-2008, 02:35 PM   #5 (permalink)
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At the time when i wrote this 4 years ago i really didn't care how it was spelled. anywho, its not about her now its about the song and having someone like hinder sing it or remake it. i just wanted to share this with yall.
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Old 04-07-2008, 02:36 PM   #6 (permalink)
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oh and the mistake part was she was like im sorry please forgive me. i don't think so......
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Old 04-07-2008, 02:37 PM   #7 (permalink)
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4 years later and you're still trying to promote a song about an ex... yeah you're DEFINITELY over her....
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And I thought you said it was NEW
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Old 04-07-2008, 08:43 PM   #10 (permalink)
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welll i got all the way to the second line.. then i vomited, so i skipped to half way through... then had explosive diarrhea
hey, at least its causing a significant effect

the high *ting* the drums are playing is annoying
the guitar is bland and boring
the voice is nails on a chalk board
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