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Old 02-05-2006, 05:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Daydream, delusion, limousine, eyelash / Oh baby with your pretty face / Drop a tear in my wineglass / Look at those big eyes / See what you mean to me / Sweet-cakes and milkshakes / I'm delusion angel / I'm fantasy parade / I want you to know what I think / Don't want you to guess anymore / You have no idea where I came from / We have no idea where we're going / Latched in life / Like branches in a river/ Flowing downstream / Caught in the current / I'll carry you / You'll carry me / That's how it could be / Don't you know me? / Don't you know me by now?

from a movie. 'before sunrise'. me likey. you likey?.
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Old 02-05-2006, 05:14 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I likey.

EDIT: that sounded very homosexual of me, so im going to add that the poem is very good and all happy like.
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Old 02-05-2006, 05:30 AM   #3 (permalink)
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That's grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat, Tony tiger style.
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Old 02-07-2006, 02:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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is this an original? cause if so, than yes. It's very mature and 'flowy'

if not than no. Because I haven't seen the movie.
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Old 02-08-2006, 03:22 AM   #5 (permalink)
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yea watch it. right now.
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Old 02-08-2006, 03:59 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Isn't that an Ethan Hawke movie, about two people who meet on a train or somewhere and only have a short time together... Somebody was going on about this a few months ago.

It might have been you.
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