still trying to figure out a title (Kiss, titles, tunes)

creepinson · 03-21-2006, 03:59 PM

Hey I've been trying to write a bit more lately and this is what I got. I'm open (really open) to suggestions for titles so any ideas are appreciated
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So shall we let these dogs lie?
Or shoot them while they sleep?
It feels as if the mistrust
and the disgust
Is worth avoiding some bites
And some blood

Nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to run

you left me a fear in the streets
a danger in the home
and your only companion
as you proclaim youre alone
And now those dying dogs howl
at more than the sky

nothing, nothing seems safe
without reason to die

a sweet and savage siren song
the deceitful salvage
of a long dead threat
deny your father
with brittle lies
while our fair lady
spoils your goodbyes
with her debts

ive found myself a reason to run, to die
to forget my misfortunes
dont forget to give her a kiss tonight
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ideas for titles?
crits?
its all good

angel18 · 03-22-2006, 02:11 AM

Ok I honestly can't understand this at all. Please explain?

creepinson · 03-22-2006, 04:53 AM

sorry youre gonna have to be a bit more specific

Crashing Sun · 03-22-2006, 09:01 AM

how about "fido plays dead for real" of course that may just be wishful thinking

angel18 · 03-22-2006, 12:49 PM

k I keep reading this and each time I can't figure out what it's about?

creepinson · 03-22-2006, 01:14 PM

its about trying to overlook your morals so that you can get to what you want, and then finally understanding that its not worth it in the end, because if something seems to good to be true, it probably is. Then theres the last little bit which is sorta about being able to accept the fact that you cant get what you want and others can

angel18 · 03-22-2006, 01:19 PM

k now I understand!

03-21-2006, 03:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	still trying to figure out a title Hey I've been trying to write a bit more lately and this is what I got. I'm open (really open) to suggestions for titles so any ideas are appreciated --------------------------------- So shall we let these dogs lie? Or shoot them while they sleep? It feels as if the mistrust and the disgust Is worth avoiding some bites And some blood Nothing, nothing seems safe without reason to run you left me a fear in the streets a danger in the home and your only companion as you proclaim youre alone And now those dying dogs howl at more than the sky nothing, nothing seems safe without reason to die a sweet and savage siren song the deceitful salvage of a long dead threat deny your father with brittle lies while our fair lady spoils your goodbyes with her debts ive found myself a reason to run, to die to forget my misfortunes dont forget to give her a kiss tonight -------------------------------------------- ideas for titles? crits? its all good Last edited by creepinson; 11-07-2015 at 05:11 PM.

03-22-2006, 09:01 AM	#4 (permalink)
Crashing Sun Idontthinkyouknow Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Out of the Frying Pan Posts: 102	how about "fido plays dead for real" of course that may just be wishful thinking __________________ People Against People "Scientists in Taiwan say they have bred three pigs that glow in the dark." (Support Spam)

03-22-2006, 02:11 AM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	Ok I honestly can't understand this at all. Please explain?

03-22-2006, 04:53 AM	#3 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	sorry youre gonna have to be a bit more specific

03-22-2006, 12:49 PM	#5 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	k I keep reading this and each time I can't figure out what it's about?

03-22-2006, 01:14 PM	#6 (permalink)
creepinson you are freakin out, man Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: ajax, ontario Posts: 129	its about trying to overlook your morals so that you can get to what you want, and then finally understanding that its not worth it in the end, because if something seems to good to be true, it probably is. Then theres the last little bit which is sorta about being able to accept the fact that you cant get what you want and others can

03-22-2006, 01:19 PM	#7 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	k now I understand!