RezZ's Songwriting Journal (lyrics, albums, artist, songs)

Dr_Rez · 11-24-2007, 11:38 PM

I have been writing for a long time, and well in my opinion non literal songs are much better.

What i mean by this is when everyone posts there lyrics here, yes they make sense, and are understandable..but they lack thought and creativity from the writing and listening aspect. A good song does not outwright tell you what it is talking about, it lets you figure it our yourself hrough metaphores or anything else that would infer a real meaning.

Maybe its just me, but i feel thats much better than just saying exactly what you mean. No song is about one thing, its supposed to be what the listener makes it.

katiexdollface · 11-25-2007, 10:12 AM

i agree totally! music should be made so that everytime to you listen to the lyrics, a new meaning could be used. Like yes, theres always a literal meaning. But the best albums are the ones where you have to sit there and think about everything it could mean and since everyone could have a different interpretation, the song becomes that much more versatile and artistic.

TheCaster · 11-27-2007, 08:05 AM

I agree music is much better when you can sit, listen, and figure out what point they are trying to get across

Dr_Rez · 12-14-2008, 11:24 PM

I have uploaded the sample I made that my band will try to turn into a song tomorrow since we bought some studio time.

Since I have no room for drum set here I made similar drum beat using keyboard so bear with it. It is a 50 sec sample of the main rhythm and solo sections. (Keep in mind I wont be doing much of the soloing the actual guitarist will)

Just tell me what you think and what I can improve on. The timing isnt perfect since its a ruff copy, but other than that its what I am showing them for an idea. I need some lyrics also, which I am having some trouble coming up with for this mood. So any ideas? Any help will be greatly appreciated.

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**Janszoon** · 12-14-2008, 11:37 PM

I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps.

Dr_Rez · 12-15-2008, 12:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janszoon

I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps.

Thanks for the reply. It will be tighter when its actually recorded and played by our actual guitarist.

Lol funny impression to get. I was somewhat trying to imitate a progressive acid trip in which your thinking about your self. Sounds ****ing stupid but hey, what the hell.

Dr_Rez · 12-16-2008, 04:51 PM

Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you...

TripperOfCCC · 12-19-2008, 12:50 AM

feel your feet lead you to the sky
like dying is meant for you and i
i hope you stop to smell the roses
hope you slip and split like Moses
ihope you take my words
i hope you read them well
i hope you understand
you gotta die
welcome to hell

i never knew a place like this existed

**Janszoon** · 12-19-2008, 12:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RezZ

Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you...

Well I was there for you, buddy.

Dr_Rez · 04-13-2009, 09:21 PM

[Fingerstyle 1 Intro]

G c D7 G
Johnny had a station, riddled with rocks.

G C Em
He just wants the tangible truth.

G C D7 G
Johnny had a station, occluded by night.

G C Em
He just wants the counterfeit wiped.

[Bridge 1]

He hit the city and the damage was done.

They bit his freedom, kept it for good.

Now Johnny sits there askin' why they never understood...

[Bridge 1]

G c D7 G
Johnny had a station, riddled with rocks.

G C Em
He just wants the tangible truth.

G C D7 G
Johnny had a station, occluded by night.

G C Em
He just wants the counterfeit wiped.

[Fingerstyle 2 Outro]

Just a simple relaxing folk song with a neat little chord progression and arpeggio intro/outro. The middle verse (and really the only verse) still needs a guitar/piano part. Will hopefully have the song recorded soon and posted with everything included.

11-24-2007, 11:38 PM	#1 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,361	RezZ's Songwriting Journal I have been writing for a long time, and well in my opinion non literal songs are much better. What i mean by this is when everyone posts there lyrics here, yes they make sense, and are understandable..but they lack thought and creativity from the writing and listening aspect. A good song does not outwright tell you what it is talking about, it lets you figure it our yourself hrough metaphores or anything else that would infer a real meaning. Maybe its just me, but i feel thats much better than just saying exactly what you mean. No song is about one thing, its supposed to be what the listener makes it. __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

12-14-2008, 11:24 PM	#4 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,361	A song idea, need lyrics and little advice. I have uploaded the sample I made that my band will try to turn into a song tomorrow since we bought some studio time. Since I have no room for drum set here I made similar drum beat using keyboard so bear with it. It is a 50 sec sample of the main rhythm and solo sections. (Keep in mind I wont be doing much of the soloing the actual guitarist will) Just tell me what you think and what I can improve on. The timing isnt perfect since its a ruff copy, but other than that its what I am showing them for an idea. I need some lyrics also, which I am having some trouble coming up with for this mood. So any ideas? Any help will be greatly appreciated. MEGAUPLOAD - The leading online storage and file delivery service __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

12-14-2008, 11:37 PM	#5 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	I definitely hear a lot of potential there, with a little tightening up I think it could be a really great song. As far as picking the right lyrics for the mood I don't know but what the song made me think of is swanky new clothes and a friday night out on the town. Maybe that helps. __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

12-16-2008, 04:51 PM	#7 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,361	Ge Wiz thanks for all the help MusicBanter. Can always count on you... __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

04-13-2009, 09:21 PM	#10 (permalink)
Dr_Rez Registered Jimmy Rustler Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 5,361	Attempt at my first folk song. [Fingerstyle 1 Intro] G c D7 G Johnny had a station, riddled with rocks. G C Em He just wants the tangible truth. G C D7 G Johnny had a station, occluded by night. G C Em He just wants the counterfeit wiped. [Bridge 1] He hit the city and the damage was done. They bit his freedom, kept it for good. Now Johnny sits there askin' why they never understood... [Bridge 1] G c D7 G Johnny had a station, riddled with rocks. G C Em He just wants the tangible truth. G C D7 G Johnny had a station, occluded by night. G C Em He just wants the counterfeit wiped. [Fingerstyle 2 Outro] Just a simple relaxing folk song with a neat little chord progression and arpeggio intro/outro. The middle verse (and really the only verse) still needs a guitar/piano part. Will hopefully have the song recorded soon and posted with everything included. __________________ Best chance of losing virginity is in prison crew Always Checks Credentials Crew nba > nfl crew Shave one of my legs to pretend its a girl in my bed crew

11-25-2007, 10:12 AM	#2 (permalink)
katiexdollface Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: the dirty jerz Posts: 32	i agree totally! music should be made so that everytime to you listen to the lyrics, a new meaning could be used. Like yes, theres always a literal meaning. But the best albums are the ones where you have to sit there and think about everything it could mean and since everyone could have a different interpretation, the song becomes that much more versatile and artistic.

11-27-2007, 08:05 AM	#3 (permalink)
TheCaster Music Rapist Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Somewhere in the U.S Posts: 400	I agree music is much better when you can sit, listen, and figure out what point they are trying to get across

12-19-2008, 12:50 AM	#8 (permalink)
TripperOfCCC Groupie Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: In nashville for now, Posts: 1	feel your feet lead you to the sky like dying is meant for you and i i hope you stop to smell the roses hope you slip and split like Moses ihope you take my words i hope you read them well i hope you understand you gotta die welcome to hell i never knew a place like this existed

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