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Old 04-29-2009, 11:21 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 04-29-2009, 11:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Well it's a start. It doesn't really say much, but sometimes simple is better. Maybe add some more body to it. It seems sort of short.
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Old 05-12-2009, 10:21 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah he's right, it seems short ^^ you should add.
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Old 05-12-2009, 10:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Depends upon what the music is like.
That song could either be ridiculously good, or horrible.
A little lyrical revision might be a good idea.
Make it a bit more heartfelt, or even more believable.
If your music is good, though, you can get away with it.
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Old 05-16-2009, 07:20 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Eliratner, your threads have been merged into one.

Read : http://www.musicbanter.com/song-writ...e-posting.html

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