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Old 12-30-2007, 05:59 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I wrote this the other day... its very piecy and rough, but any feedback would be helpful...


No need to hide/It rains it pours/No don't cry/It will live,won't it live/ but these fears hide behind my eyes/ I want to be held/ these suspicions grow/I am ill in the heart/ these tears are on lock down/ i have emotion don't you feel me sigh/ i have a heart still don't you see me cry// boundaries and lines/ deception and lies/laws broken and abandoned/why wont you leave me alone/words stuck in my throat/tears fall from my eyes/this isn't meant to be/ i want to be left alone//that mirror reflects the light it burns my eyes/i shiver in the cold frozen like snow/ i don't feel the pain i dont want you to stay// why am i so cold/ perfection surrendered a long time ago/why can't you leave me alone/ why am i so cold/i just want to be held/what does it mean to be held//

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Old 12-30-2007, 07:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It was good. Too emo for my taste tho.
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Old 12-30-2007, 11:55 PM   #3 (permalink)
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err, thnx lol
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