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Old 08-27-2008, 12:58 PM   #7 (permalink)
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What did you get the ticket for?
wasn't it obvious? "cause my tint is resistant "

Not bad Jay, of course this may work extremely well to music... as a written piece I felt the beginning and end flowed nicely and the middle not so much. A lot of the end rhymes and phrasing were like mini stop signs for me but overall I felt it was well thought out.
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