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Old 09-11-2008, 03:11 PM   #31 (permalink)
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:12 PM   #32 (permalink)
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I can give you my opinion if you want?
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:18 PM   #33 (permalink)
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I can give you an opinion too. I don't mind..honestly.
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:19 PM   #34 (permalink)
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Maybe he just doesn't like you.
shall I slam dunk him?
go on then.
But critique my serious songs.

See oojay calls me an ass and writes "****ty lyrics?"
He doesn't have much wit in the way he critiques my words does he?
Then you look at his views in slavery section and you get the idea he thinks he is a bit aggressive.
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:20 PM   #35 (permalink)
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Well you're cool... just asking, because it seems like, you post a lot in here, and to me, respectively, it just seems like all your stuff has respectable grounds, but lacks a story, or substance, if you will. Man, I love commas... anyhow. What I do is stay with one piece for a while and develop it.
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:23 PM   #36 (permalink)
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I think it's wonderful
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:23 PM   #37 (permalink)
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So this song is not serious then?
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:35 PM   #38 (permalink)
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No, if cliff sang it it would be but don't you laugh at cliffs christmas songs?
I am assuming if you have any nouce you do.
But what people make of the same thing is their choice.
For example if I hear whams club cococabana on holiday I piss myself as it is so stupidly and saccarine and funny but there are people who probably love pop idol who would love the song as a serious song.
You make of it what you will.
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:48 PM   #39 (permalink)
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No, if cliff sang it it would be but don't you laugh at cliffs christmas songs?
I am assuming if you have any nouce you do.
But what people make of the same thing is their choice.
For example if I hear whams club cococabana on holiday I piss myself as it is so stupidly and saccarine and funny but there are people who probably love pop idol who would love the song as a serious song.
You make of it what you will.
Then you don't have a problem with oojay's appraisal then?
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Old 09-11-2008, 03:48 PM   #40 (permalink)
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This lacks pretty much everything positive.
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