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Old 03-15-2009, 04:25 AM   #81 (permalink)
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Default bare faced

Within the tapestry of my mind,
your find useful imformation left behind.
thoughts and debates that i have won or lost,
the drugs i have taken the forgettfulness.
Its a peice of art il have you know
the window is open come on inside,
take a look around and make notes
surf the net, ride the tide.

its nothing but awesome
its a whole new world in there,
its unbelievable unfolded and bare.
All routes taken searching for life
im open for business 9 til 5.

What you seek i hope you find
ive left you nothing, but time.
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Old 03-15-2009, 04:34 AM   #82 (permalink)
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wow thats a sincere message nice one.
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Old 03-15-2009, 08:07 AM   #83 (permalink)
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Default tair

Deliver me from this place
im asking you nicely,
dont want to show my face
if i have to il gladly.
If you help me on this day,
you wont regret it, il pay.
read my lips its life or death,
ignore me, il take my last breath.

The fight is on,
onward and upward
left, standing are the strong!
tired, journey way to long.
long waking hours corrupting my mind,
need to rest,ran out of time.
Help me deliver me,
into the arms of nicety.

Afraid in deed
my safe surroundings gone,
im now in need
treated badly way to long.
if you didnt know me
could you tell what i am,
is this description to vague
are your senses totally numb.

It was a late friends dying wish
that i would become all i could be,
so not knowing who i was
i joined the army.
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Old 03-16-2009, 01:35 PM   #84 (permalink)
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Default south

Going off the rails
hurt, hungry and helpless.
Pounding to get help
no-one hears
tairing my hair out
root to root.
gone to far,
i feel nothing.
bald n bloody
no drug killeth this pain.
Reaching out to the sane,
face against window pane
to tired to call out my name.
Im trapped within
bars up under my skin
my history haunting me
when awake when asleep
this pains for keeps.
Swallowing my good sense
inside the eye of a storm,
ive lost my grip
from the norm.
Authority will lock me away,
hand it over this day.
Madness a warm blanket
solitary confinement.
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Old 03-16-2009, 02:01 PM   #85 (permalink)
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Default note it.

got my self a black cadilac
im hitting the road
ive left a note its on the front door
i picked it up for 1000 nomore
off to the city for a classy whore.

123 turn the key
456 my ticket out of the sticks
789 travelling light
10 im dreaming

got my self a black cadilac
and ive hit the road
im not returning its in the note
ive found the way,ive left you this day.

123 last time your see me
456 got to get my kicks
789 you got yours,now i want mine
10 im leavin.
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Old 03-16-2009, 02:23 PM   #86 (permalink)
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Cool leafed friend

i picked up a four leaf clover
wow my troubles are over
as soon as i found you, i knew
right away its a brighter day.

Its been a rocky road since i can remember
it started getting bad last december
thats when all the walls closed in on me
swept away on the wave called misery.

Now my future looks as bright as the sun
a new chapter has begun
farewell to the old one
bring it on fun,fun,fun.

So quick my transformation
with only one explanation
a lucky omen my four leafed friend
together now til times end.
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Old 03-18-2009, 11:10 AM   #87 (permalink)
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i just love the sentiment expressed in this song...it is so nice to hear someone writing a love song to their wife for a change,,,beautiful...brightened up my morning.
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Old 03-19-2009, 07:06 PM   #88 (permalink)
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Quote:
Originally Posted by chard View Post
got my self a black cadilac
im hitting the road
ive left a note its on the front door
i picked it up for 1000 nomore
off to the city for a classy whore.

123 turn the key
456 my ticket out of the sticks
789 travelling light
10 im dreaming

got my self a black cadilac
and ive hit the road
im not returning its in the note
ive found the way,ive left you this day.

123 last time your see me
456 got to get my kicks
789 you got yours,now i want mine
10 im leavin.
im confused on what the numbers mean
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Old 03-20-2009, 04:28 AM   #89 (permalink)
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Dont pay to much attention to those numbers lol. I was a little tipsy when i wrote that one.It flowed at the time.
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Old 03-20-2009, 05:43 AM   #90 (permalink)
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Default falls

Rain falling down,
splashing clear crystals
all around.
as far as it is wide,
falling as seen with my naked eye.

Colour scopes and shades depart,
from the rolling of the wind
with my delight.
Tinted tops on a heavenly landscape
a wild wind captures this moment.

rivers in the making
rapidly running by,
sillouettes in colour
creating two skies.

Nature following its course,
how awesome is its force.
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