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Old 02-10-2009, 07:10 AM   #21 (permalink)
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elvon, you are not very talented from what ive read so far.
and this is not good because it is just you whining about everyone hating you.
bland. boring. repititive.

Edit: And do not call me kid, you're thirteen years old.
Right.. Lol ^^
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Old 02-10-2009, 02:13 PM   #22 (permalink)
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Okay so if you don't want any constructive criticism, why are you here?
And if this song isn't just about you being a self indulged emo kid, please, do tell me what it's about.
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Old 02-11-2009, 08:29 AM   #23 (permalink)
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Well that's not really me in the song!
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Old 02-11-2009, 03:45 PM   #24 (permalink)
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Well that's not really me in the song!
Then replace all the pronouns 'cause people aren't going to like you son.
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Old 05-07-2009, 01:02 PM   #25 (permalink)
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Default My New Rock Song " Never Fall Down "

After all things that I made
I just knew I had mistakes
But you wont forgive me again
But that's all I want from you now! ..


Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!!

I just walked by all over again
And I saw you going through the plane
Wanted to be far away from me
Dont you ever leave me alone.. Again!!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I swear that I never pretended to be.. Another one's Hero!... Yeah!

Cuz we will! Never fall down all over again!
I never knew that your mind isnt like I wanted it to be.. Let's never fall down again!!










Comment please! Im having a Lyrics competition soon and I need to make one before the week ends. (:Tell me if it's not good so I can make another one ^^
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Old 05-09-2009, 01:20 PM   #26 (permalink)
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Default Making New Band!

Hello, Id like to make a new band on Music Banter. I know it seems strange, but I'd like to get like 2 people.. Release new songs on here in lyrics. Ill need a Rock Band!
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Old 05-09-2009, 02:38 PM   #27 (permalink)
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i support you fully, but jackhammer or another moderator is going to close this thread pretty soon because self-promotion and advertising aern't allowed, sorry dude, wish i could help.
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Old 05-13-2009, 08:59 AM   #28 (permalink)
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I tried to find the best in the lyrics, but I couldn't find anything that would win a competition. >.> Good try, though. A for effort.
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Old 05-13-2009, 09:30 AM   #29 (permalink)
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Yeah, the competition got cancelled though :P
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Old 05-13-2009, 10:50 AM   #30 (permalink)
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Good. It's never good to try to rush inspiration.
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