Hey people, need comments on this song i wrote

CitlaliScarlett · 07-23-2010, 06:28 PM

Life seems to fall
Just like raindrops
And it's something we can't stall
Face and fight it all

Face the fear
And then life will seem clear

Ponder before you choose the allies
And take a breath
Close your eyes
Then return to reality

Become an oneironaut
Feeling the impossible
But you can't always be what you're not
Send your will to me and leave the distraught

Face life
With only light in your eyes

Ponder when you choose your allies
Take in a breath
Close your eyes
Then return to reality (X2)

Some mistakes are fixed
Even though life is once
In sinful fire I was lynched
In You I was saved

Ponder your chosen allies
Taking in a breath
Closing your eyes
Returning to reality

07-23-2010, 06:28 PM	#15 (permalink)
CitlaliScarlett Music Addict Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: somewhere and if you can here my call then you're down in this same world with me, if not, well.... Posts: 53	New song that again has no title i tried to change the theme of my previos songs Life seems to fall Just like raindrops And it's something we can't stall Face and fight it all Face the fear And then life will seem clear Ponder before you choose the allies And take a breath Close your eyes Then return to reality Become an oneironaut Feeling the impossible But you can't always be what you're not Send your will to me and leave the distraught Face life With only light in your eyes Ponder when you choose your allies Take in a breath Close your eyes Then return to reality (X2) Some mistakes are fixed Even though life is once In sinful fire I was lynched In You I was saved Ponder your chosen allies Taking in a breath Closing your eyes Returning to reality __________________ We only have one life, live it like it's the only, because it is. Love like it's the only thing in your heart. Listen to the things people say because they'll come back around someday. -My mentors and me