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Old 10-11-2015, 09:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey. I write music that's electronically made but is similar to the style of alternative rock (Other many other genres). But in any case, here are the lyrics I wrote.

Verse 1
When you're dreaming in the clouds and your head's in the sky,
But you're not quite welcome and you wonder if
There's only room for someone to be blamed

To believe there is only one design
That there's no compassion for the human mind
Most people will never know the contrast that it makes

Chorus

And the constant perception that they have planned
Is that we're to live by their demand.
You live by the repercussions that they create
But you know; no matter what, that it's too late

Verse 2
You're looking behind sealed walls made of glass
Observing the simple feelings given by life
Our eternal problems always seem so small

The way one moves the way one talks
One's sudden emotions and habitual thoughts
It seems so pointless to try to understand.

Chorus 2
It's as if you're always treated with fear
You wish all your simple troubles could disappear
To get snapped back into reality
Only left to see what you don't want to see

And the constant perception that they have planned
Is that we're to live by their demand
You live by the reprucussions that they create
But you know; no matter what, that it's too late.

Middle Break
There are no rules for speculation, as long as they can get their way
It matters few to what your choice is. You're not quite clear on what to say.

Chours 3
You sit there thinking if it's worth the wait
For our constant misery to perpetuate
Should we go on trying to believe
If there's not a moment left for us to grieve

You sit there thinking and you try to recall
That there's not a happy ending that's given to all
Because even in time you still remember
A bit of light in a dying ember.

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Old 10-12-2015, 05:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Seems pretty good- I like it. I'd love to hear it someday.
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Old 10-15-2015, 05:32 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks. I still feel as if it needs to be polished overall. The song is more pretty but kind of calm.
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Old 10-27-2015, 09:25 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Is there a story behind this lyrics?
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