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I look both ways
Only darkness Hopeless Are you lost like me? Doctors without faces Walking through these places Can they see The country boy in me I beg you to pull the trigger And pay the grave digger His family needs to eat too And I'm a waste of space like you This one is nowhere near done. Any opinions? |
Don't be so concerned with trying to rhyme and you can make something sound very personal without using "I" and "me".
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Whatever happened to Alan Smithee? Is he alive?
IMDB says he's got new movies on the rise But I'm pretty sure that's a lie. Alan, if you hear me, will you let me know? I miss the classics of Hellraiser and Burn Hollywood Burn. You need to make more I need more Alan Smithee films Is Alan Smithee alive? |
im judging you
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i think this are quiet good lyrics for a beginner song. dont let you iritate by musiciens who write this song in 5 minutes. I would say you are on a good way. Only thing is: write, write, sing, sing... Then you will get better and better. Try different subjects and music. Have fun!
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But yeah, the dead flirt thing is a noGooo :D hehe, i was laughing my ass off. But do your thing man. if these are your thoughts then write it! :)
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