I need help writing a second verse for a song credit will be given

MDTF · 10-01-2020, 05:53 PM

I need help writing a second verse to a song and help with the chorus credit will be given if I ever end up recording the song

[intro]
pink rabbit
rabbit ah

[Verse 1]
roll a couple blunts load a couple bowls
ion really care that's how its gonna go
cause tonights a night
for you, me, a little bit of green
and I'm not talking dough
anyone can come through if they ain't a foe
sit around and make each other glow
you already know
yeah I pass out that green no quid pro quo
we living tonight like we came
from down below
sit in the focus smoking
I'm hitting **** like a pinball machine
token
take a couple more doses
till I'm going in out like osmosis

[Chorus]
cause tonight is a night for onesies
living in luxury tomorrow when we wake up
we're gonna need introductory
so many drugs it's like me flipped around {em}.
recovery (Eminem)

Oriphiel · 10-02-2020, 04:54 PM

Yo I got your back, mate. Here ya go.

(Verse 2)
bro why did nobody ever tell me
it was so hard to drive while jerkin' it
drove right into a pizza hut drive-thru
now they got me workin' it
gotta pay all them bills man
'cause grass don't buy itself
and I ain't talkin' bout weed either
nah, I'm talkin' lawns man, and top shelf

uh

every single weekend I see the young dudes trippin',
and they can keep that **** 'cause you know I'm busy clippin'

[Chorus]

that's right

other boys be smokin'
and I'm like, "yo, that ****'s whack!"
'Cause the only grass I need
is in my sexy lawn out back

now ya'll can do what you like
smoke some weed
play some tunes
get yourselves all turned around till you're flyin' to the moon
but don't you throw that **** at me
like all the fists you be throwin'
'cause while you suckas out there hatin'
I'll be in my lawn growin'

[Verse Three]

a lawn man, son
yeah
you know that's what I am
and you can just catch this hand
you try to litter on my land

I got them good mowers, bitch
keep my **** clean and neat
go nice and slow so I don't shred my feet
wave to the cops that walk the beat
'cause I ain't afraid of them
hell nah
they get up in my face, I just laugh like it's rich
'cause hey
you may be a law man, snitch
but I'm a lawn man, bitch

uh

[Chorus]
all the ladies be dopin'
and I'm like "girl, that ****'s obscene!"
'cause your clothes would look much better
scattered all across my green
got it freshly cut
for your butt
so lay them cheeks down
and lets play another round
as my batter takes your mound

uh!

I'm whippin out my driver
goin' for dat hole-in-one
and before this day's done
girl
I'll make that pussy hum

[obligatory Snoop Dogg guest rap, app. five minutes]

L
to the A
to the W
to the N

lawn lawn lawn

so call me maybe

**Marie Monday** · 10-02-2020, 04:58 PM

Top shelf stuff. On par with Martini Blue

Oriphiel · 10-02-2020, 05:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marie Monday

Top shelf stuff. On par with Martini Blue

Omg there's no way I can compete with that

How does a mere mortal even compose such inimitable beauty as:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pineapple001

Girl, you wanna mmmm
Then I will nod
Cause you mmmm
Girl whats your flavor , mmmm

**Marie Monday** · 10-02-2020, 05:11 PM

Also 'Turn off the phone, I don’t want that brrrr, yeah'. Unassailable.

Neapolitan · 10-09-2020, 09:09 PM

Standing on the corner crossfaded
Totally Jaded
cause my ho is tardy
now I'm late for the party
I could be there drinking Bacardi
with Darnell my homeboy
and his homeboy Rob Roy

Slipping through the street
and guess whom I meet?
A couple of PO PO on the beat
Pigs punch me in the bowel
I'm hurting now
Grunting like a sow
Moaning monosyllabic words like "ow!"
Standing in the precinct where cops took me
Asking me questions while they book me
Through in the slammah
next to Bubbah Alabama
Now I'm shuddering, shuddering, shuttering like a camera

**Janszoon** · 10-09-2020, 10:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MDTF

cause tonight is a night for onesies

Gonna shit myself hardcore
Nanny gonna wipe me down
Slather me up with Desitin
Then the pee fountain starts
I'm gonna kick her with my booties
And motherfucker I'm gonna laugh

10-01-2020, 05:53 PM	#1 (permalink)
MDTF Groupie Join Date: Jun 2020 Posts: 2	I need help writing a second verse for a song credit will be given I need help writing a second verse to a song and help with the chorus credit will be given if I ever end up recording the song [intro] pink rabbit rabbit ah [Verse 1] roll a couple blunts load a couple bowls ion really care that's how its gonna go cause tonights a night for you, me, a little bit of green and I'm not talking dough anyone can come through if they ain't a foe sit around and make each other glow you already know yeah I pass out that green no quid pro quo we living tonight like we came from down below sit in the focus smoking I'm hitting **** like a pinball machine token take a couple more doses till I'm going in out like osmosis [Chorus] cause tonight is a night for onesies living in luxury tomorrow when we wake up we're gonna need introductory so many drugs it's like me flipped around {em}. recovery (Eminem)

10-02-2020, 04:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
Oriphiel Ask me how! Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: The States Posts: 5,355	Yo I got your back, mate. Here ya go. (Verse 2) bro why did nobody ever tell me it was so hard to drive while jerkin' it drove right into a pizza hut drive-thru now they got me workin' it gotta pay all them bills man 'cause grass don't buy itself and I ain't talkin' bout weed either nah, I'm talkin' lawns man, and top shelf uh every single weekend I see the young dudes trippin', and they can keep that ** 'cause you know I'm busy clippin' [Chorus] that's right other boys be smokin' and I'm like, "yo, that 's whack!" 'Cause the only grass I need is in my sexy lawn out back now ya'll can do what you like smoke some weed play some tunes get yourselves all turned around till you're flyin' to the moon but don't you throw that ** at me like all the fists you be throwin' 'cause while you suckas out there hatin' I'll be in my lawn growin' [Verse Three] a lawn man, son yeah you know that's what I am and you can just catch this hand you try to litter on my land I got them good mowers, bitch keep my **** clean and neat go nice and slow so I don't shred my feet wave to the cops that walk the beat 'cause I ain't afraid of them hell nah they get up in my face, I just laugh like it's rich 'cause hey you may be a law man, snitch but I'm a lawn man, bitch uh [Chorus] all the ladies be dopin' and I'm like "girl, that ****'s obscene!" 'cause your clothes would look much better scattered all across my green got it freshly cut for your butt so lay them cheeks down and lets play another round as my batter takes your mound uh! I'm whippin out my driver goin' for dat hole-in-one and before this day's done girl I'll make that pussy hum [obligatory Snoop Dogg guest rap, app. five minutes] L to the A to the W to the N lawn lawn lawn so call me maybe __________________ ---------------------- \|---Mic's Albums---\| ---------------------- ----------------------------- \|---Deafbox Industries---\| -----------------------------