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Old 03-19-2006, 03:34 PM   #11 (permalink)
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I think you're the one who needs to shut his mouth.
If you want to improve your writing, then why would you post a song that you know isn't your best?
Why get one that you already have the ability to improve upon, critisized?
Put up a song that you feel represents your best effort, and then get ways to improve upon that. And you could also stop being a sexist ****. That may help.
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Old 03-19-2006, 03:39 PM   #12 (permalink)
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I wasn't being sexist, your a confused little person.

I posted one of my mediocre songs so I could see how that turns out. I've posted my best stuff online before and its gotten stolen by other bands that I know. To me it looks like your too stupid to realize that people steal, and if I posted my best, the opportunity might come up for someone who actually likes it to steal it, your not very smart...
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Old 03-19-2006, 03:40 PM   #13 (permalink)
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And if your so interested in being a little badass, why don't you ****ing come on AIM so we can have a real discussion you scaredy ass.
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Old 03-19-2006, 03:41 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Noobs are great, arent they!
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Old 03-19-2006, 03:43 PM   #15 (permalink)
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If you dont even think that the song is good, then what makes you think that anyone else will?
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Old 03-19-2006, 03:47 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Because there are some really lame songs out there that are pretty good. They might not even mean something, but they are someones feelings and/or they just rule.
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Old 03-19-2006, 06:20 PM   #17 (permalink)
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It's not that bad i mean I like how you took the time to think of something like that.

All i'm saying is it's not the best i have seen but it is also pretty good and well thought out so I'm not saying its bad at all.

I think it's good

7/10
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Old 03-19-2006, 06:29 PM   #18 (permalink)
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I agree, the lyrics are pretty lame oh! But you got guts though!
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Old 03-19-2006, 06:30 PM   #19 (permalink)
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bungalow, dead eternity....lets keep this clean.
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Old 03-19-2006, 06:31 PM   #20 (permalink)
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I agree with what anyone says because its not the best but its not the worst none the less
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