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right-track 05-02-2007 12:15 PM

Tonight the big match,
yet strangely nerveless...
Stella times six perhaps?

DontRunMeOver 05-02-2007 02:28 PM

Hello To The Weymouth Beach Tramp

Kick your flea-bite dog
And raise that bottle to those
Vomit crusted lips

DontRunMeOver 05-02-2007 02:33 PM

The Truth

Right-Track is a girl
Right-Track is a big girl's blouse
Right-Track plays with dolls

right-track 05-02-2007 03:30 PM

Goodbye to the Weymouth Beach Tramp.

While intoxicated by the grog,
the vomit stained tramp,
asphyxiates on Tom’s knob.

right-track 05-02-2007 03:33 PM

The Myth

DRMO is straight… fo sho! *
For show, his poetry,
mocks those who know!

*denotes heavy sarcasm.

sleepy jack 05-02-2007 03:38 PM

Thomas is rubber,
And you are glue what you say,
Sticks back on to you.


=D

DontRunMeOver 05-03-2007 08:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by right-track (Post 363556)
Goodbye to the Weymouth Beach Tramp.

While intoxicated by the grog,
the vomit stained tramp,
asphyxiates on Tom’s knob.

That One Sucked Because It Wasn't Even A Haiku

Five, seven and five
Strict Haikus or sling your hook
No more free-form jive

right-track 05-04-2007 10:32 AM

What! No free-form avant-garde Haiku jive?

Haiku in a word...
is deconstructionalism.
Dressed up like a turd!

DontRunMeOver 05-04-2007 11:57 AM

By Way Of Conversation

I don't understand.
Haiku... deconstrucionalist?
Please explain, Right Track.

right-track 05-04-2007 12:16 PM

Stop being an elitist Haiku purist...cut me some slack here. :(


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