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Old 06-23-2007, 09:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default more of a poem...

But I would love to get some opinions on it... Could it be a song??

You were a little boy.
small, shy, and scared.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You went through Military school,
With loving help from your sister.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You started racing,
You wrecked and won.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You lost your dad,
On that February day.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You got through,
All of the pain.
That has made yu
Who you are today.

With lots of help
From family and friends.
That has made you
Who you are today.

You chose to leave
The team your father built.
That has made you
Who you are today.

Your brave and strong,
And I'm happy to say.
I'm sure your dad is proud
Of who you are today..

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