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Old 12-24-2008, 10:41 PM   #51 (permalink)
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That was great. Very original.
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Old 12-25-2008, 08:23 AM   #52 (permalink)
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I'm so confused. I just wanted to know why they were making faces. >.<

It is a good poem, though.
Well done. >.>
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Old 12-27-2008, 11:12 AM   #53 (permalink)
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Shut the **** up.
Yo man you haven't seen the streets like I have.

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Old 12-29-2008, 05:17 PM   #54 (permalink)
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You talk like that out on "the streets" you'll get your ass knifed.
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Old 12-29-2008, 10:02 PM   #55 (permalink)
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You talk like that out on "the streets" you'll get your ass knifed.
Oh I'm sorry Bob Dylan, I'll watch out in those *** pride neighborhoods.

Also, Troy, New York - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

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Old 12-29-2008, 10:13 PM   #56 (permalink)
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MS, what are you helping right now?

Anyway, to prevent this from being a spam post, this is a good poem. The metaphor base of it is good, and the description is great too. Bueno.
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Old 12-30-2008, 10:47 AM   #57 (permalink)
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Oh I'm sorry Bob Dylan, I'll watch out in those *** pride neighborhoods.

Also, Troy, New York - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

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What's your point? Yes, I know I live in a ****hole. I like it, it's got soul.
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Old 12-30-2008, 11:33 AM   #58 (permalink)
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What's your point? Yes, I know I live in a ****hole. I like it, it's got soul.
A ****hole with an 80% white population with plenty of them middle class or up, sorry Bob Dylan I can't give you much street cred as you'd like.

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Old 12-30-2008, 11:42 AM   #59 (permalink)
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I never asked for street credit, ace.

Are you saying blacks are criminals, sir? Damn, that's racist! By the way, wikipedia is a freewrite, anyone can submit anything. Sites like this: Troy New York Crime Reports, Crime News, and Crime Statistics , are not freewrites. Whities have guns and dicks too, mate.
Uncle Sam's Place - Troy, NY -- TUI - Gang-related activity in Troy's North Central Neighborhood

Explain to me why then, if I go to Troy High up here, instead of saying "One of the black kids..." The lingo seems to be, "one of the white kids...". In my Science class, I am the only white broad in there.

And why the **** do you keep calling my Bob Dylan? Yes, I like the man, I do, one of the most talented musicians to ever walk the earth. But Bob Dylan's closer to Billy the Kid than he is Johnny Truelove .

And that tall drink in the icon? That's Cate Blanchet.

x.x, motherfucker.
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Old 12-30-2008, 02:07 PM   #60 (permalink)
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GOOD POEM. I LIKE THE POEM.

I'm pretty sure the person didn't make this thread so that you two could argue.
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