Chard's Songwriting Journal (single, member, Ching, Hang)

chard · 03-08-2009, 10:53 AM

my heart lies here with you
theres a song in my heart when your in view
you make me feel alive
when you come home at half past five

when you are with me i feel 10 feet tall
you are great looking you are beautiful
theres no one that has ever made me whole like you do
my love for you will always be true

i never ever think of being with anyone but you
you think the same when im with you to
you are my light of day even when the skies are grey
tasteing the magic were thinking the same way

love has hit us both between the eyes
what a revelation what a surprise
its normally one or the other
never at the same time
now we both can stop our climb

the air is sweeter now and can be sweeter still
now were together it most definitly will
i can see a long road ahead of us
hitching a ride on the love bus the love bus.

7gaugejames · 03-08-2009, 11:44 AM

I've taken the time to read ten or so of your poems Chard, I must say you are the pinkest "Quill"

I've read in awhile. Prolific and full of life, Kudos Chard. I like how you put it out there,

you must be in love. Oceanside and happy, 7gauge.

adidasss · 03-08-2009, 11:48 AM

Terrible.

chard · 03-08-2009, 12:32 PM

you must be very lonely,adidasss,group hug.x

adidasss · 03-08-2009, 12:46 PM

No, I just don't have a penchant for cheese. Stop writing or at least publishing this crap.

chard · 03-08-2009, 04:48 PM

sorry that its not your cup of tea old boy.i have to keep on writing ive got to think of my fans.if you dont likey dont ready.

adidasss · 03-08-2009, 05:25 PM

If you don't likey criticism, don't publishy...

Schizotypic · 03-09-2009, 12:05 AM

It could use some work IMO, but to each is own. You seem pretty happy with your work.

chard · 03-09-2009, 03:44 AM

riveting episodes
edge of my seat
cant stop watching
on tenterhooks
each and every heart beat counted

howling of the wind
to the dogs barking
in the back alley
camera shot action
electrifying momentary
lapses of reason
running to the grand finalle
tempature rising
the cold smooth head
running down my throat

time capturing defined moments
that freezes captions forever
safe guarding us all
to a higher level of understanding
accepting by the deliverence
of imagination from the void of humanity.

concurring that the whole
is more vunerable watching
with the naked eye
self commited to define each moment
accuratley than those wearing spectacles.

**Janszoon** · 03-09-2009, 09:39 AM

Heh. The word is "tenterhooks" not "tender hooks".

03-08-2009, 10:53 AM	#51 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	love bus my heart lies here with you theres a song in my heart when your in view you make me feel alive when you come home at half past five when you are with me i feel 10 feet tall you are great looking you are beautiful theres no one that has ever made me whole like you do my love for you will always be true i never ever think of being with anyone but you you think the same when im with you to you are my light of day even when the skies are grey tasteing the magic were thinking the same way love has hit us both between the eyes what a revelation what a surprise its normally one or the other never at the same time now we both can stop our climb the air is sweeter now and can be sweeter still now were together it most definitly will i can see a long road ahead of us hitching a ride on the love bus the love bus.

03-08-2009, 11:44 AM	#52 (permalink)
7gaugejames Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Imperial Beach Ca. Posts: 101	Chards Love Bus; as follows, I've taken the time to read ten or so of your poems Chard, I must say you are the pinkest "Quill" I've read in awhile. Prolific and full of life, Kudos Chard. I like how you put it out there, you must be in love. Oceanside and happy, 7gauge. __________________ I don't care who you are, Gunslinger, shmunslinger, everyone needs a good purse.

03-08-2009, 11:48 AM	#53 (permalink)
adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	Terrible. __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

03-08-2009, 12:46 PM	#55 (permalink)
adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	No, I just don't have a penchant for cheese. Stop writing or at least publishing this crap. __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

03-08-2009, 05:25 PM	#57 (permalink)
adidasss Slavic gay sauce Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Abu Dhabi Posts: 7,993	If you don't likey criticism, don't publishy... __________________ “Think of what a paradise this world would be if men were kind and wise.” - Kurt Vonnegut, Cat's Cradle. Last.fm

03-08-2009, 12:32 PM	#54 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	you must be very lonely,adidasss,group hug.x

03-08-2009, 04:48 PM	#56 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	sorry that its not your cup of tea old boy.i have to keep on writing ive got to think of my fans.if you dont likey dont ready.

03-09-2009, 12:05 AM	#58 (permalink)
Schizotypic Souls of Sound Sailors Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Mojave Posts: 759	It could use some work IMO, but to each is own. You seem pretty happy with your work.

03-09-2009, 03:44 AM	#59 (permalink)
chard Music Addict Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: england Posts: 390	define lapses riveting episodes edge of my seat cant stop watching on tenterhooks each and every heart beat counted howling of the wind to the dogs barking in the back alley camera shot action electrifying momentary lapses of reason running to the grand finalle tempature rising the cold smooth head running down my throat time capturing defined moments that freezes captions forever safe guarding us all to a higher level of understanding accepting by the deliverence of imagination from the void of humanity. concurring that the whole is more vunerable watching with the naked eye self commited to define each moment accuratley than those wearing spectacles. Last edited by chard; 04-08-2009 at 10:54 AM.

03-09-2009, 09:39 AM	#60 (permalink)
Janszoon Mate, Spawn & Die Join Date: May 2007 Location: The Rapping Community Posts: 24,593	Heh. The word is "tenterhooks" not "tender hooks". __________________ A Night in the Life of the Invisible Man Time & Place 25 Albums You Should Hear Before the Moon Crashes into the Earth and We All Die last.fm

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