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01-17-2009, 03:06 PM
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Groupie
Join Date: Jan 2009
Posts: 11
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Review My Catchy Pop/Acoustic/Indie Song?
Its untitled at the moment but heres the song i'd like you guys to take a look at and review if possible!
Verse 1:
I need your love But I know I cant get it Ive missed your face Since you walked away from me Chorus: And I'm trying, trying, trying Trying to walk away And I never, never, never Think this love will fade Cause I miss your face And I need you now In my life Verse 2: Since the day you walked away Ive never been the same All I have to say is I want you back babe Chorus: And I'm trying, trying, trying Trying to walk away And I never, never, never Think this love will fade Cause I miss your face And I need you now In my life Repeat Verse 1: I need your love But I know I cant get it Ive missed your face Since you walked away from me Chorus: And I'm trying, trying, trying Trying to walk away And I never, never, never Think this love will fade Cause I miss your face And I need you now In my life |
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