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07-30-2010, 08:22 PM | #61 (permalink) |
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I like this one, It's more like I can't explain the song to myself but if I sing it in my head I sort of get a feeling from it
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07-30-2010, 09:15 PM | #62 (permalink) |
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Well I just felt like putting it up because I don't know, I just felt like it and thank you I'm glad you find some kind of feeling
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07-30-2010, 10:07 PM | #63 (permalink) |
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haha I get what you mean, sometimes I don't know what to write, so I just put old songs of mine up when it gets like that. Keep up the good work though
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07-31-2010, 10:35 AM | #64 (permalink) | |
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haha thank you
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08-06-2010, 02:28 AM | #65 (permalink) |
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You still are doing good, reminds me that once I get besides a PSP, I need to start a journal... for now, I'm still limited to reading. Gives me some tips in addition to the thread titled for that.
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08-16-2010, 01:31 PM | #66 (permalink) |
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Contagious
I was bitten by every one
Of the lies I wish gone The toxins reached to my heart And now it seems we can't be apart The virus is eating me It's killing me I need a cure, I need the cure Infected by love that's yours I'm infected by you I let you in me And now I have been infected by you I can't get rid of what's now me It's like my vital air It's something I can't bear Your love is venomous Your love is contagious The disease is eating me It's killing me I need a cure, I need the cure I've been infected for sure I'm infected by you I let you in me And now I have been infected by you I can't get rid of what's now me You're so contagious to me It's like a disease For so long I thought something was wrong with me I found that something was missing in me I thought it was you And now I'm addicted to you I need you now Or help me find a cure You're so contagious to me I'm infected by you I let you in me And I have been infected by you I can't get rid of what's now me You're so contagious to me It's like a disease You're love is contagious You're contagious Help me find the cure To separate me from you Or just stay with me Don't make me beg for my life |
08-24-2010, 09:46 PM | #67 (permalink) |
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I like it. It has many metaphors (MANY), but it still makes a clear point. I know if I packed with that much, I'd screw up.
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09-25-2010, 04:09 PM | #68 (permalink) |
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THIS IS A MUST READ THINGY! : This is NOT a song. It's just something I wanted to put up because I have something to say. I don't know why I want to say what I'm saying here, but I feel I should put it up. SO DON'T HATE! Just appreciate....
~ Where will I go? (Dreams) ~ I've slept for so long, but never dreamed I've slept for so long, I can't remember who I am, or who I was But I'm finding out that life isn't forever And nor was your love My heart has been turned to ashes As you were to lie down Now I ask myself as I lay half awake "Were you really worth it?" I don't know I wait for the pain to ease I want to know the truth behind your lies But how can the forever sleeping speak? Unless you talk in your sleep, Unless you scream or dream, I've given up so much for you I wish I knew why the day turns to night And the night into day I too was lost in the world, But we promised we would be lost together And now I am lost all by myself With no one to talk to, to sing to, to tell my hopes to, to wish to dream of, to confide my secrets to, to share my love to, to show life through my eyes to, to smile at, to cry to, to laugh with, to live by their side. Now you became a star that mocks me Now you became the wings that soar above me Now you became my idol And I'll never know whether you meant what you said The night before you left: "Darling, as I leave this door tonight, I want you to know That I do love you But I don't know if I should If it would be right for me to be attachted to you To hold all my purpose in you For if you are gone, where will I go?" So the question you asked could never be answered For you left with my purpose You tried to not attach yourself to things To people You tried to release all bonds But the truth was, In the coldest nights without you, Your arms that once held me tight, I longed for I bonded my spirit with you And now it lies in the ground with you So the question you asked could never be answered, And now I am burying my life, My soul, My spirit, My love, I am burying it all So the question you asked could never be answered, And I lie on the ground above you as the rain pours down So the question you asked could never be answered, And nor can mine: "Love, you have told me, you didn't know if you could be mine, And you have asked me, If I go, where will you stay And now it is you that is gone By the vanity in of your own hand So now, Love that was my Life, Now that you are gone, where will I go?" I'll find my way around though It'll be a different ending I won't ever make that mistake again Of falling for you Because you are not mine forever Like you said you would So the question you asked can never be answered Where will I go? |
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