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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 06-28-2010, 09:27 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
I just wrote one verse for a song.. What do you...

I just wrote one verse for a song.. What do you make of it?



Before I continue it, I also want to know, do my lyrics sound like pretentious, verbose tosh with the metaphors and all?? I feel...
Forum: Talk Instruments 04-14-2010, 03:51 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,393
Posted By primo
Seriously thanks! Before I stopped lessons I...

Seriously thanks! Before I stopped lessons I asked my teacher if my voice sounded nasally and he said no, that my voice just needed to get stronger.. But nah, I wasn't sitting down. I was standing up...
Forum: Talk Instruments 04-09-2010, 02:39 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,393
Posted By primo
Thanks a million for all the advice (even the...

Thanks a million for all the advice (even the banter about voices was interesting haha).

To be honest, I don't exactly know if/when i'm using my throat or not (I often lightly put my hand on my...
Forum: Talk Instruments 04-08-2010, 04:31 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,393
Posted By primo
Tips for singing..

There might be debate over whether vocal cords are considered an instrument but I didn't know where else to post this..
Anyway, somebody was telling me if you sing a lot and aren't doing the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-21-2010, 02:29 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 875
Posted By primo
I like it - you've communicated a bittersweet...

I like it - you've communicated a bittersweet feel (dying/sacrificing for love) and it's visual-evoking. Maybe I haven't read into it well enough but the lyrics aren't that specific so I can't really...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-21-2010, 12:26 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 877
Posted By primo
Yeh, I wouldn't say it's exactly...

Yeh, I wouldn't say it's exactly original/creative stuff but it's not badly written. This could easily fit in with a lot of stuff that's on the radio..
t3hplatyz0rz makes a valid point, but I do...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-16-2010, 06:54 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
lol yeh i know.. Sorry I don't quite...

lol yeh i know..


Sorry I don't quite understand what you mean? I just put cheated/deceived/hypnotised because I just wanted to know what ppl thought would sound better..

But otherwise are you...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-15-2010, 08:27 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
Anchor (Cut Off)

This is an alternative/rock song. When I sing this to myself the melodies/instrumental of Kasabian's 'Julia And The Mothman' come to mind. I'd give the YouTube link but don't want it to be...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-07-2010, 12:32 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 690
Posted By primo
Lyric style?

I was just wondering if this song would be considered a particular lyric style which has lines that I can't decipher or if some lines are just meant to be ambiguous?? Can sombody read through and...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-07-2010, 12:27 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,842
Posted By primo
Haha I'm assuming the line refers to the "plenty...

Haha I'm assuming the line refers to the "plenty of fish in the sea" saying. I say dw - it probably just sounds funnier in writing.
Forum: Introductions 01-28-2010, 06:00 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 479
Posted By primo
thanks for telling me! Everybody should be able...

thanks for telling me! Everybody should be able to read it now!
Forum: Introductions 01-27-2010, 06:03 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 479
Posted By primo
Hey!

Lol yeh original thread title, but hello! This isn't my first post, but I thought this might fit the 'get to know you better' clause. I was wondering if anybody could tell me their thoughts on my...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-08-2010, 05:38 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
I was reading through the lyrics of a Morrissey...

I was reading through the lyrics of a Morrissey song "That's how people grow up".. It pretty much expresses the same sentiment of my lyrics.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-04-2010, 01:34 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
Wow.. thanks for your thorough analysis! I really...

Wow.. thanks for your thorough analysis! I really value that sort of feedback.
As you said, the song is about yearning and wrestling with feelings of restraint and desire, but not so much for a...
Forum: Talk Instruments 01-03-2010, 11:35 PM
Replies: 52
Views: 14,724
Posted By primo
Percussion is a type of instrument. Even if the...

Percussion is a type of instrument. Even if the drums don't create a distinct melody, it creates rhythym - an element of music.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-03-2010, 11:32 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
A R&B/Pop Instrumental

Lol I've noticed that this sub-forum doesn't really talk much about R&B/Hip-Hop beats, but I thought I would post this just to see if there was anybody interested.
It's all i've done so far, but you...
Forum: Pop 01-03-2010, 11:30 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,023
Posted By primo
I was actually surprised how generic it is -...

I was actually surprised how generic it is - could be any tryhard. 'According to You' has has reached Top 10 in AUS and Top 40 in US; I guess she wanted to make a safe impact on the charts, which she...
Forum: Pop 01-03-2010, 11:24 PM
Replies: 580
Views: 63,504
Posted By primo
To me the song is just disposable pop. Sounds...

To me the song is just disposable pop. Sounds like Cascada.. who sounds like a concoction of commercial pop music lol. But it is a fun and catchy track..
Forum: Electronica 01-03-2010, 11:19 PM
Replies: 208
Views: 53,279
Posted By primo
Also is it just me who can only listen to dubstep...

Also is it just me who can only listen to dubstep for so long before they get a headache? I mean I really like dubstep, but I can only stand especially the heavier, less melodic stuff for so long at...
Forum: Electronica 01-03-2010, 11:17 PM
Replies: 208
Views: 53,279
Posted By primo
Yeh I like Rusko.. Not sure if anybody's...

Yeh I like Rusko.. Not sure if anybody's mentioned 'Mistabishi', but their sort of drum n bass with a dubstep edge!
Forum: Indie & Alternative 01-03-2010, 11:15 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,324
Posted By primo
Who's better live: Franz Ferdinand or Kasabian?

I really like both bands equally - love their singles and don't mind a few tracks of their albums. Not sure if I should pay so much to see both so was wondering if I had to see one, which band those...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-03-2010, 10:45 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
Let Me Fly (Pop/Rock)

Hey! lol I can't think of a second verse for now, but here's the first verse and chorus..
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

I feel suffocated
I long for independence
Responsible...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-20-2009, 11:43 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,558
Posted By primo
Well I guess mean telling the same...

Well I guess mean telling the same story/sentiments but in different words.. e.g. if you wrote 2 songs about the same situation where there's a person you like who doesn't know you exist .etc.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-16-2009, 06:01 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
30 views and not one reply?? lol surely the...

30 views and not one reply?? lol surely the lyrics aren't that awful..
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-09-2009, 05:33 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,048
Posted By primo
'Before You Fall' lyrics - Feedback returned!

I've only written one verse and a chorus.. It's written as a mid-tempo R&B song. If you critique my lyrics, I will do so for your's - just leave a link and brutally honest constructive criticism!

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