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Old 09-28-2008, 01:25 PM   #31 (permalink)
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He should have. Guns r loudz.
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Old 09-28-2008, 10:27 PM   #32 (permalink)
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This isn't that good, but you've written a lot of good stuff.

Captain Caveman - Maybe you could be less of a cunt and contribute something meaningful?
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Old 09-28-2008, 10:41 PM   #33 (permalink)
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In retrospect, I don't think much of it is good actually. LOL. But thank you love<3
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Old 09-28-2008, 11:25 PM   #34 (permalink)
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Captain Caveman - Maybe you could be less of a cunt and contribute something meaningful?
fuck you - my post was about as quality as this poem was
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Old 09-29-2008, 06:46 AM   #35 (permalink)
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Mm, well, quality, no. I spent hours "perfecting" that, obviously in vain, but. It took you two seconds to come up with a lame quip
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Old 10-10-2008, 10:00 PM   #36 (permalink)
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I enjoyed this quite a bit. It was weird how I was wondering where Heath was on the list and BAM he was in my face, text wise. I love the ending the most.
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Old 10-11-2008, 08:18 AM   #37 (permalink)
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I enjoyed this quite a bit. It was weird how I was wondering where Heath was on the list and BAM he was in my face, text wise. I love the ending the most.
And here I thought I had writer's block :p. Haha. Thank you very much, Surell
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Old 10-11-2008, 09:10 PM   #38 (permalink)
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Lack of Tupac/Biggie bothers me a bit, but he was kinda murdered. The other guys didn't get homicided, I don't think.
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Old 10-12-2008, 12:37 PM   #39 (permalink)
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Exactly
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Old 10-12-2008, 01:16 PM   #40 (permalink)
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well...I thought it was pretty good...
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