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Old 12-22-2008, 01:44 PM   #71 (permalink)
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Well thank you

The relentless sexual implications goes back to the first paragraph or so
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Old 12-22-2008, 02:09 PM   #72 (permalink)
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I feel the same way as fruitonica. The sexual conotations kinda turned me off of it but it was a fun read. The first half was far better than the second half. But all in all, there were some pretty powerful metaphors in it that I kinda felt as I read. Good job for the most part.
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Old 12-22-2008, 03:50 PM   #73 (permalink)
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Old 12-22-2008, 05:36 PM   #74 (permalink)
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I wouldn't say I find it fun but it's pretty intriguing. and yes there was room in there for sexual parallels, but u put way too much really. I liked the part with the cigarette as well.
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Old 12-25-2008, 01:02 PM   #75 (permalink)
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Reminds me of William S. Burroughs "Naked Lunch" in some ways. nice work.
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Old 12-25-2008, 03:44 PM   #76 (permalink)
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You don't know how much of a compliment you just gave me. In all seriousness. Thank you.
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You don't know how much of a compliment you just gave me. In all seriousness. Thank you.
no problem was simply the honest truth. it is obvious you have tremendous style and talent. Burroughs was a genius. Books like 'Naked Lunch' and 'Junky' were before their time. your writing has that cutting edge quality. cool & hip in a Ginsberg way too. you must have read all the other great beats it kinda shows in your techniques.
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Leonard Cohen would love this.
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Old 12-25-2008, 05:51 PM   #79 (permalink)
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Bukowski is my favorite... but he didn't like to be considered a "beat". Ginsberg was the man. Burroughs was a genius. All the guys with the candor thing going on have my respect.
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Christ, thank you!
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