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Old 08-25-2009, 03:04 PM   #181 (permalink)
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Default there's no better time

The sound of sirens passing outside
and the screams from strangers passing by
another emergency in the dead of night
another death from another fight
All for what, an unwanted stare
to cause a back lash not exactly fair.

War is frowned apon, but it's what we need
fighting is natural, the survival of our breed.
So much frustration and anger locked up within
it's only a matter of time before anarchy begins.

All peoples over 25 grow softer with age
wisdom and truth is written clearly on their page
but for the teenager who lives souly for himself
he's not bothered with that emotion it doesn't connect
his passion for blood and recognition demands respect
ultimatley from the person lying on the floor taking his last breath.

So what do all the authorities say
something that provides a solution,
It seems to me they are as confused as we are
and for that reason we all stand alone.
Worlds apart devided by class
truth is never declared
hatred builds and nolonger can contain itself
a nation on the edge of anarchy, with a government that doesn't care.

If truth be known i am beyond caring myself
what will unfold God only knows
death to us all with laws that provide suffocation
this road is long, death resides in every direction.
With all this in mind, it's only a matter of time
before the new order is revealed,
rise up my brothers, this post is sealed.
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Old 08-26-2009, 11:21 AM   #182 (permalink)
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Default my first day

Out from beneath my parents shadow
free now more than ever before
first task i must do is get some wheels
and get as far away, from them as the law allows.

I am free now, whats a boy to do
dream't of this time, a dream come true
I had a plan to live in my car
but now i am thinking it's below par
don't want to sleep out under the stars.

For tonight im crashing at my pals place
he's expecting me to come over
he's going to help me find a place
he said it isn't any bother.

Something small dirt cheap, that will do for now
i'm working in a grocer store near by town
That's where the action is, well after hours
it's the only reason, within my power.

Out in the world feeling great
not a bad place to be in, no matter what state.
It's all coming together, it's my time anyway
destined for greatness, one fine day.

Finding it easy, proving i was right all along
when the timing is right, all will come along
nothing to fear no matter where i tread
i am in the zone, and have enough bread.

I am a young man, with a wise head on my shoulders
you don't get nothing for nothing, but sometimes it comes free
in the right place i guess, all good things coming to me
it's an over sight that makes life a mystery.

I learned alot, yes i went to school
i learned never to be anyone's fool
Though i didn't get very good grades
but like everyone i am entitled to, good days.

As far as i am aware it's down to teenage luck
and from here on in who gives a ****.
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Old 08-26-2009, 02:01 PM   #183 (permalink)
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A lot of this stuff seems repetative, and in my mind they would all sound the same. You got a few good ones in there, that aren't all depressed and boring (in terms of rhyming). Try experimenting more, and step out of the strict 'AABB' scheme. A band I listen to (Floater) sometimes rhymes by stanza: ABCD AECD or something like that. Also try to broaden you're vocabulary; the more colorful the language, the more colorful the song!
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Old 08-27-2009, 03:31 AM   #184 (permalink)
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Shy straight male looking for fun
I have no criteria i will eccept anyone
I have searched far and wide with no results
which makes me feel even worse.
I found this site just by chance
is anyone out there looking for romance
I am twenty five and six feet tall
it will be your opinion if i am good looking at all.

Since school i have had a long relationship
thought it would last for all time,
its been eight months since iv'e had someone to hold
a person that loves me, really all mine.

I like dancing i like sex, always eager whats coming up next.
I am not one to roll over and say goodnight,
just get on board and hold tight.

By now you know i am sexually frustrated
Iv'e been patient yes i have waited.
Now my charm has almost gone
can't see the point of turning it on.
Running dry near to empty
I only want you to know that i am friendly
I am being open and honest, it's the only way to be
reply to this entry, be my destiny.
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Old 08-27-2009, 11:08 AM   #185 (permalink)
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Hm now that seemed a little desperate. You aren't being serious here, correct? I mean, is this song just a song or is it an actual reflection of how you feel?
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Old 08-27-2009, 11:23 AM   #186 (permalink)
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Delicatley i lay down thee
into a place of love
almost perfect close to my heart
i will never ever leave you.
All my life, you hold in your hands
you have all and that is why, i wait by your side.

Tender moments captured in your presence
lifting me up to unfirmiliar ground.
Awesomeness your beautifullness as you stand before me
your eyes so distinguished, your voice so soft
i crumble at the sight of you, though you give me comfort.

Hold me close never let me go
without you it would be a world, that i don't know
you are the only life i know and wish it to stay
no one can reach me like you do in everyway.

The time i spend with you, is the only time i remember
your in my thoughts night and day,
since meeting you it's always been that way.
You are so bright and wonderful
you have changed my life, I cannot ignore.
Loving you is easy, you cannot do no wrong
goddess of love, to you i dedicate this song.

Remember me when i am old and grey
will you think of me as your perfect slave.
Doing everything always at your command
forever yours my darling, forever i stand.
You turned my world upside down
you made me think i was lower than you,
and i swallowed it, and loved your point of view.

No regrets you wore the pants,
i was your bitch and commanded to dance.
Now i am at death's door
my heads at peace theres no living war.
Ready to pass on by, nothing more to reveal
on my knees under your heels,
waiting for the last turn of the wheel.
To slip inside of unconciousness without a blink of an eye
preparing for my last breathe before i die
You don't have to utter anything, just kick me like a dog
and laugh when i croak like a frog,
I will be waiting for you on the other side,
to clean your dirty linen and to hear you say goodbye.xxx
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Old 08-28-2009, 11:31 AM   #187 (permalink)
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Default sahara bow

I asked her why she was tying a ribbon to a tree
she said you are the first, youv'e taken my virginity
I said really is that true you seemed so experienced
she smiled back, started to dance, singing of a new romance.

She told me that she would tie a ribbon to every tree
when ever we are naked and running free
and when ever we make love, and where ever we may be
the ribbon represents fond memory's.

Down to the waters edge hand in hand
to watch the reflection of a woman loving her man
Watching the water slowly burying her head
pulling back her bed covers in my bed.

Entering a world that could easily shatter like glass
so soft so pure so inviting,
always to quick to stop and think
with her everythings exciting.
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Old 08-29-2009, 05:00 PM   #188 (permalink)
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I really do not know who i am anymore
Iv'e worked for so long and forgotton who i really am.
I'm now so mixed up that i feel isolated
want nothing more than to recognise myself.
To release myself from these chains that bind me down
recognising that iv'e lost myself is the greatest find
hope i can rejuvinate all that i have lost
freedom isn't just a word that you can take lightly
I know i won't find it in a bottle.

Take some air find a place in which i can think
fill a bag and travel take a break.
Deliver me a way out of this predicament
and the burdens that i carry around with me.
May you open my eyes that i may see a different world
and become something new.
I don't want to be left behind in a place i don't belong,
I don't want to find that everyone has been and gone.
Recently iv'e discovered i have no friends
and iv'e lost touch with my family.
I have been self sufficient for many years,
and only now i'm feeling lonely and confused.

Just wanted everything because everything i desired,
now i have everything i have grown tired.
So really i don't have everything i need the essence of life,
a comforter, a nagging wife.

It's true i could buy a bride, have her today by my side.
A human being moulded into a perfect slave
But knowing i had to pay,I have to run away.
I'm proud that i have achieved everything i have achieved
while others failed, my boat sailed.
Into wealth and prosperity, a world of the elite.
This is encredible i now want to give it up
i want all that i have lost, didnt see it to be at such a cost
that all must be forgot, left behind to rot.

My house is up for sale fully furnished
should get a good price, i'm clenching my fist
Make a new start where i grew up
taking one day at a time, a life run by my heart.
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Old 09-02-2009, 11:37 AM   #189 (permalink)
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Default choc n cream

Can't get you out of my head
oh sugar want to take you to bed
It's more than food, that has gripped my soul
iv'e a feeding frenzy to fill my hole.
Shoveling it down like theirs no tomorrow
my waking feeling, i'm full of sorrow
When i open up the fridge and it's empty
it's a curse and their is no remedy.end...

Sweet and sour, grease oh fry
i'l eat it, i'm not shy,
It doesn't matter if i'm full, i can't say goodbye
I'L eat and eat even after i die.

I don't even feel that great, when i go shopping for clothes
One whiff of cooked food, i follow my nose.
I just can't help myself feeling the way i feel
often leaving town full, naked at the wheel.

Clothes don't fit me well, baggy really not cool
wear black to hide your fat, i'm everyone's fool.
Thanks but no thanks can't take critisism
time will tell whether i recieve wisdom.
Some people are drinkers, sex addicts and smokers
mental patient's, hullucinating toker's.
What a relief i stand for gluttony
oblivious on health issues, living wild and free.
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Old 09-04-2009, 02:12 AM   #190 (permalink)
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Can't get you out of my head
oh sugar want to take you to bed
It's more than food, that has gripped my soul
iv'e a feeding frenzy to fill my hole.
Shoveling it down like theirs no tomorrow
my waking feeling, i'm full of sorrow
When i open up the fridge and it's empty
it's a curse and their is no remedy.end...

Sweet and sour, grease oh fry
i'l eat it, i'm not shy,
It doesn't matter if i'm full, i can't say goodbye
I'L eat and eat even after i die.

I don't even feel that great, when i go shopping for clothes
One whiff of cooked food, i follow my nose.
I just can't help myself feeling the way i feel
often leaving town full, naked at the wheel.

Clothes don't fit me well, baggy really not cool
wear black to hide your fat, i'm everyone's fool.
Thanks but no thanks can't take critisism
time will tell whether i recieve wisdom.
Some people are drinkers, sex addicts and smokers
mental patient's, hullucinating toker's.
What a relief i stand for gluttony
oblivious on health issues, living wild and free.
Hahaha, I just wrote something like this, except on caffine. Very funny.
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